The dynamism of the piece is nice but the girl looks like someone paint-bombed her.

i dont like the shirt color, but otherwise the illustration is pretty cool. not really the type of thing i would wear tho

yea it looks cool but as a shirt it's kind of meh.

i am absolutley terrified. her face doesn't look right because of the colors

yea, she looks pretty creepy...

I don't like the shadows on the side of her head. Thank you for centering it though. 3

boobs dont sit like that, not even on robo-girls.
the head/torso/neck just dont work together anatomically.
the paint on her face looks too much like... uhm... errrrr....yeah.

A for Effort.

Makes me think of Mystique from the X Men (Specifically, Rebecca Romaijn.. and no, I can't spell)

Bukake.

i like the first placement example, and the concept is great, but when i look at a girl in the moonlight, or witht he soft glow from my closet, or glancing at her in the dark at the movies....well, she always seems prettier than that, keep the emphasis on the lips like you did here, but don't forget the other elements to a woman's face....either way, $5

the lips are WAY too bright.

The face and especially the lips look kinda gross.