i used to have dreams...

The "flammable guitar" is upside-down in the ad.

The font used for Rockstar Catalog is a good font, but the C's look like O's. At first it looks like Rookstar Oatalog.

"The "flammable guitar" is upside-down in the ad. "
wow wyrogerg, just wow.

umm, 'package,' not 'pakage.'

This needs a bit more work...then maybe resubmit. 2.

it's also spelled 'chic', not sheik, don't ask me why.
one is french, and the other is a rich arab.

hmm good idea, but maybe this would sell better in a store like Spencer's? its just not very threadless.

I think the idea could be entertaining, but the errors need some attention...

I think you mean "chic" and not "shiek"? if you fix it up, maybe add a couple more things, i'd like it a lot.

oops, didn't mean to post. i am giving you a 3 but if i seen a new improved version from you i would definitely give it a five.

Hee hee, the "sheik" cracked me up! Wouldn't wear it with those errors, but in just a sub, they made me laugh.

awesome awesome idea... i won't bore you by repeating the obvious "needs fixin'" list, but the idea and the overall look is something i'd totally wear -- especially to band practice.

"The "flammable guitar" is upside-down in the ad."
Bravo, sir.

needs lots of work, hehe. nice though

The cutout is weird next to the boxes. It's a very awkward layout.
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i did mess up th chic ting, that's my bad, but as for the upside down guitar, JIMI HENDRIX plays his guitar upside down and lit it on fire.

sheik or sheikh or shaikh n
1. the leader of an Arab tribe or village
2. a senior official in an Islamic religious organization
3. a handsome and physically appealing man (dated informal)

Encarta® World English Dictionary © 1999 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved. Developed for Microsoft by Bloomsbury Publishing Plc.

using definition number three, i guess the sheik instead of sheik is technically still okay.

"sheik" is spelled chic.

the flaming guitar is $3000, but the arm candy model is only $100? shes not gonna be very pretty for that low of a price... like the concept tho. think it should be chic. sorry.

did you also used to be whole assed? because what you've served up here is half assed. next time, try dreaming in color.

i likeee.

That's way too packed.

The pants are only 10$?

Score.

i actually really like the idea of this, and even if you did mispell chic on accident, i liked it "sheik", cuz chic is a weird word, but mispelling package is kind of an insult to people like me who can't spell at all but at least know how to spell basic words and edit something before submitting it. i still like the idea though

spell check bra'. Meh, I dunno. It reminds me too much of hipster bingo.

-JR

awesome concept who cares what other people say this doesnt belong in some trashy american store like hot topic ...it belongs on threadless

Who in the hell would actually wear this piece of crap shirt? You're an idiot.

it shouldnt say 'pelvic push' its suposed to say 'pelvic thrust'

work on some of the details and I think this would be good
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too much stuff

haha its kinda ok.. i guess but the errors do need some attention ''/

this misspelled "pakage" ruins the whole thing. fix it and I'd give it a five. :]

Pink?
Is that person with the guitar Jimmy Page? That's the first thing I thought of when I saw this. If that really is Jimmy Page I'd so buy this. But... I don't like the pink and baby blue... takes away from the effect of Rock.

Yikes-- no. Spell check PLEASE.

shouldn't that be geek CHIC? Heh although Geek Sheik would be a neat shirt idea

This shirt is amazing. I think it would work better with more black and less pink... sharper, darker colors. But nonetheless this is one of the best ideas for a threadless shirt I have EVER seen (It may also work better without the word "pakcage"...)

ROKSTARZ DONT NO HOW 2 SPEL. THAT'S Y THIRE ROCSTARZ.
I LIKE IT LIKE IT IS

Hey assholes, why ya gotta be so rude? There's ways to be critical. It's called tact.

That said, I'm not big on this shirt, and to be taken seriously, you really should think about looking over your designs a bit more before submitting them to such a vast [not to mention critical] audience. It kinda looks like you just threw it together.

I also could see this shirt in some little record stores and being worn by the 45 yr-old garage bands drummer that slings records there, but not by threadless.

One more thing.. Jimi Hendrix plays guitar?

id buy this simply to wear at my friends bands shows as a joke.



BUT,,, make it on black. thats "true rockstar", damnit.

very nice work :)

This is a decent old-fashioned catalog concept...just isn't refined yet.

• Reduce the colors to 1...all black maybe.
• Take away the rockstar dude- he created a weird off balance to the otherwise sharp layout.
• Spell check ALWAYS.

I like the idea, but it needs a touchup. Fix what people above said, and it's a 5$.
But right now it's a 4.