i want the money, seriously.

You've got it! 5+$

maybe a bit more effort?

Put the play on the shirt and maybe

Definitely add the play and tilt the text a bit so it's not so straight. And put it a little off center. Maybe change the yellow to something of a darker green in the same family as the shirt itself. Then, you got a tee worth buying.

i am not giving you any money for this :)

I think this is awesome.

I like the unfinished style... ive actually been using that on something im doing. Sometimes I think alot of the threadless audience can't handle something with a bit of mess, unfinished or that doesn't look vectorised enough.

5

it looks like a contour drawing, and i really really like it. 5.

I like it a lot.

The blatant honesty mixed with the
homegrown drawing style is great.
I'd like to see the play on the shirt
( back - centered ) with the solid
arrow going to the X that ran toward
the $ sign ( make the X's location to
the left of a sideline so we can figure
out the guy on the front of the shirt
is running off field which caused him
to step in a water bucket).

starting lineman, jersey number: KO, sandra rothchild!

nice work on the fonts!

this is seriously great, I wish I hadn't missed my chance to score it

agreed. ^

this is fucking amazing!