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Jan 16 '06
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Pretty colors.I like the factories and smoke part.
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This is a great idea $5
Thats really all i have to say, i'm trying to find problems to suggest an improvement on, but i really love it |
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great idea...needs a little cleaning up. But not bad yo.
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the pollution part is beautiful, but the lungs suck comparitively... they don't look very real, even cartoony-real.
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Interesting concept
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Skipper6745 on Jan 16 '06 Yea, I may do a redo of this once my illustrator skills improve. But thanks for the comments, everyone!
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i love it, needs some re-arranging though. try the pollution parts above the lungs. maybe top left. and then the lungs might work mid-center. needs more cigarrettes other than that subtle one. but i really do like it.
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Pink, yellow, white, blue, green = 5 colours. It also looks bigger than the maximum size of 13" square.
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Skipper6745 on Jan 17 '06 Oh crap...how did those 5 colors slip by?
Let's not get hung up on technicalities, people, they wouldn't have accepted it had it been out of the question. Please vote on design and stop being the design police. |
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OlliRudi on Jan 17 '06 needs a bit of cleaning up, but it's refreshing and the extreme colors are interesting. not sure if i could pull off wearing it, though
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travis76 on Jan 17 '06 i like the colors, too bad you can't use all 5. you're really evolving, skip....!
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I think it's perfect as far as looks...but the placement I'm kinda confused on. The lungs are where I'd expect to see lungs but then why would the pollution message be around the stomach/intenstines area? I'd have no problems buying and wearing it. 5$
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Just have the polution part and remove the lungs
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and well i will vote it down for having 5 colours because its a lot easier making a design with 5 colours than it is with 4 so its kind of a challenge.
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you are my hero. i got the shirt today and i love it.
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Apart from the 5 colors, I give it a five.
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Love! It's so relevant in todays world.
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lol the design police..rofl ANYWAY!
I think its a creative concept. GJ |
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This is dumb and political. Nuclear Power is the future, get over it, and it is the most environmentally friendly thing there is. Get your facts straight, and actually think for yourself rather than be a dumb liberal that repeats and beleives everything that is fed to them. And by the way, ever think of what comes out of the smoke stacks of a nuclear power plant. STEAM. (H2O in its gas state, ever heard of it?) Yeah, that really pollutes our world. No, wait, sorry, it does nothing.
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Skipper6745 on Jan 18 '06 I'm not liberal, just had a quick idea for a shirt. Don't really care about pollution, as much as it seems stupid to say that.
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hmmm why are the nuclear power plants there
other than them i love the design but i dont understand why theyre there it just looks like a misinformed hippie shirt with them o rosomething |
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Skipper6745 on Jan 19 '06 I am misinformed, that's true. Not a hippie, though.
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Why does Threadless bother having rules about size and colour if they are going to allow a t-shirt which breaks one, if not two of the rules?
I have nothing agianst this t-shirt design or Threadless, I'm just confused about the lack of consistency in the use of the entry guidlines. Hmm... |
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I rather like the nuclear plants; they add a retro feel reminiscent of anti-nuclear activism of the late '70s. Besides, those who were alive when Chernobyl blew know that nuclear energy, despite its advantages, isn't a risk-free proposition. The fact that the steam escaping from those cartoonish stacks COULD be contaminated with radioactive material due to a plant accident makes them fit right in along with the factories and cars.
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too much going on
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love the colors, interesting concept, afraid to vote considering too many colors so eventually itll have to be changed anyway.
fix the colors and resubmit. |
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took me a while to et it. heh.
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get*
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to be perfectlthonest I would like it if it were just the lungs
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damn my typing
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I'd say to ditch the lungs.
I absolutely love the shirt, and it's a great concept, but I'm not sure I'd wear something with huge lungs on it. I adore the pollution bit though, its gorgeous. |
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i think... it would be cool if it was just the lungs or just the factories pollution stuff, or put one on the front or the other on the back... that would be cool... yup.
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