normally i like off centered placements but I think this should be centered. it's just too blocky down there.
AND I LOVE IT!!!!
center it and it'd totally be a $5!!!!!!!!
Well this is my first submission! I really appreciate the few CONSTRUCTIVE critique that I can actually use. It's really funny as I read feedback from not only my sub but others with a bunch of bs! Cmon guys give some critique that we can actually improve our designs. lol and its usually the people who havent even submitted a design, wow! Atleast we have! Well I appreciate all the votes and critque so far, you guys rock!! Thank you so much!!! THREADLESS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!! :)
wow she has got to do something about her pubes
sorry but thats just not right
i see where you were trying to go with this though and its a good idea just....has to be fixed up
I agree with moving it to the center, but keep it at the bottom of the shirt.
The placement of the "roots" combined with the black shirt combine to make a possible horror scenario shirt where her legs were ripped off and the nerves and blood vessels are dangling down...
The "horns" seem to be a result of your placement of the head superimposed on the same color lines
Christ almighty that's spooky. Imagine that floating through your bedroom door while you're trying to sleep... :D
Anyway, it's a nice design. The first thing on my mind when I saw it was something along the lines of The Grudge. I didn't read pubes at all. :P I'd like to see a closer image. And maybe the "roots" could dangle down a bit further.
Maybe if you put "My Roots" or something on it, and the quote at the bottom; I would like it more. But none the less, it is a very good idea. ~3
<3 Tess
Great first sub, I don't have any yet but that's cause I don't want these thredless guys making $ off my designs!!! Ha ha Just Kidding! I just like buying everybody else's cool stuff. Wish I had more time to comment and submit but we're to busy printing our own stuff. Anyway, The shape of the girl is the great thing about this design. The My roots wording mixed into the actual roots is cool as well. If you can find a better way to tie them together it would be nice. Maybe if the roots were rooted in something it would have better symbolism. The roots could be a little more detailed to go with the girl silhouette art. The lines behind the girls head could shift a bit to get rid of the horn effect. Also, if you could find a different way to frame the image and not have it be so square and blocky and symmetrical it would be dope! Check out www.brandnewclothing.com, word up! Keep up the nice work! -Scotty
The Captain of Awesome
Your roots are your vagina?
This doesnt make any sense.
norock
I do not come on to threadless to be asked moral, introspective, or ontological questions
brennao
This is an awesome design, I will totally buy this. $5
It makes me think of Japanese horror with the long black hair - which I love!
handjohnson
Good Miss Karla.
Twirly
Nice one, MissKarla.
pitbull love
normally i like off centered placements but I think this should be centered. it's just too blocky down there.
AND I LOVE IT!!!!
center it and it'd totally be a $5!!!!!!!!
sorrysnails
the combination of curly roots and placement makes me think of pubic hair, maybe if the roots were right after her chest instead of at her vagina....
Solari
kinda looks like she has devil horns
Damoz
It looks like a shadow monster or something forming right before you.
I like it.
kevinwells
yeah, it definitely looks like she has horns. and about all the hairy vagina comments... well... not my first thought, but i can see it.
neat design, but not something i'd wear.
MissKarla
Well this is my first submission! I really appreciate the few CONSTRUCTIVE critique that I can actually use. It's really funny as I read feedback from not only my sub but others with a bunch of bs! Cmon guys give some critique that we can actually improve our designs. lol and its usually the people who havent even submitted a design, wow! Atleast we have! Well I appreciate all the votes and critque so far, you guys rock!! Thank you so much!!! THREADLESS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!! :)
asher27
um.
isnt there a gradient there?
you cant use a gradient by the way if there is one...
its not bad but i wouldnt want it on a shirt.
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AsStarsGoOut
her hair sucks. i like the way you wrote "my roots" but I think i's bad placement and it means absolutly nothing it just looks like it does.
timeforyourpills
fived and i'd buy it. <3
whatchaback
i'd get this one.
i do like the shadow affect.
no one impotant
wow she has got to do something about her pubes
sorry but thats just not right
i see where you were trying to go with this though and its a good idea just....has to be fixed up
shadowlemur
I agree with moving it to the center, but keep it at the bottom of the shirt.
The placement of the "roots" combined with the black shirt combine to make a possible horror scenario shirt where her legs were ripped off and the nerves and blood vessels are dangling down...
The "horns" seem to be a result of your placement of the head superimposed on the same color lines
I like the design--not bad for a first submission
MissKarla
thank you for the awesome critique guys!!! :)
mutedXwhispers
um, if she put it at the bottom center, it would gear more to a stringy pubic haired vagina. so, off to the side sounds better.
Electrospecter
Christ almighty that's spooky. Imagine that floating through your bedroom door while you're trying to sleep... :D
Anyway, it's a nice design. The first thing on my mind when I saw it was something along the lines of The Grudge. I didn't read pubes at all. :P I'd like to see a closer image. And maybe the "roots" could dangle down a bit further.
Donnerstag
Maybe if you put "My Roots" or something on it, and the quote at the bottom; I would like it more. But none the less, it is a very good idea. ~3
<3 Tess
suziemawnster
love it
Scotty T
Great first sub, I don't have any yet but that's cause I don't want these thredless guys making $ off my designs!!! Ha ha Just Kidding! I just like buying everybody else's cool stuff. Wish I had more time to comment and submit but we're to busy printing our own stuff. Anyway, The shape of the girl is the great thing about this design. The My roots wording mixed into the actual roots is cool as well. If you can find a better way to tie them together it would be nice. Maybe if the roots were rooted in something it would have better symbolism. The roots could be a little more detailed to go with the girl silhouette art. The lines behind the girls head could shift a bit to get rid of the horn effect. Also, if you could find a different way to frame the image and not have it be so square and blocky and symmetrical it would be dope! Check out www.brandnewclothing.com, word up! Keep up the nice work! -Scotty
MissKarla
THANKS YOU ROCK!
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