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The Elephant Man

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Jan 06 '06
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natetek

About my design

by natetek
My First Tee-shirt design
softserveanalogy
softserveanalogy on Jan 06 '06
Eep, I love this.. but perhaps a different colour. Still $5 though.
bejung
bejung on Jan 06 '06
The blue background is very hard for my eyes but the drawing is very good
apaperweight
apaperweight on Jan 06 '06
I think I would like the red better if it wasn't just a rectangle thrown in back. maybe make it look more like a sunset or semi circle shape? the line cutting through the man's leg takes away from the effect of his overall stance, which i really really like.
Organs
Organs on Jan 06 '06
Yeah this is nice. Well done. 5$
pastio mcduff
pastio mcduff on Jan 06 '06
i agree with apaperweight... the red is just another shape you don't need



the trees are littole much but overall i think it's one of the best on threadless right now... a few minor tweaks and it'll be GOLDEN!
mle82
mle82 on Jan 06 '06
i love the idea/design, but hate the colors...primary colors, ick. i really wish there were some other color options because i might buy it if there were. and i also agree with the consensus on the red rectangle. keep posting!
kevinwells
kevinwells on Jan 06 '06
cool artwork for sure, and as everyone said, change/lose the red rectangle and the bright blue shirt. with the black silhouettes and what looks like a moon, this looks like a night shot to me, so I'd want a darker, night-ier blue. not too dark, 'cause you need to see the black artwork, but just not royal blue.
CrazyMarlo
CrazyMarlo on Jan 06 '06
my vote is for a one-color black shirt. I love one-colors
elmo77
elmo77 on Jan 06 '06
complete dislike for the red

cool though
creaturekillher
creaturekillher on Jan 06 '06
it's a nice design, but i'm not liking the blue.



first: the backgroud tee should match the design, at least a little bit. and that bright blue doesn't.



secondly: the blue against the yellow and red is actually a little bright and irritating to the eyes.
Dindrane
Dindrane on Jan 07 '06
Very nice design, especially since it's your first! I do agree that the blue is kinda bright, though. Maybe a more subdued blue, or a sage green?



Nice work!
rabbot
rabbot on Jan 07 '06
I really like the design (complete with random red block), but it's hard to look at on that bright blue. That it's hard to look at takes away from the design, IMO. On a milder color it would be better.
Just a figment of your imagination
Great job man. I'd just make the blue a tad bit darker, to take the edge off.



Its got style, which is what really counts.



nicely done.
natetek
natetek on Jan 07 '06
Thanks all... I'll see what I can do
Split-Reason
Split-Reason on Jan 07 '06
yeah, fix the background, and you're golden.
Aimstar
Aimstar on Jan 08 '06
I think it is perfect exatly the way it is. I immediately fell in love with it!
inayellowsub
inayellowsub on Jan 08 '06
oooo man i really really like this!

something about it is fantabulous.

5.
caeganQ
caeganQ on Jan 08 '06
hey nate! this is sweet ! the backround should be a like a dark graish blue though . And that would also mean that your red thing would have to be darker too. Or maby you could change the red thing to like purple mountains or somthing. I dont really know how this thing works yet, can you change your disigne? Ya any way its really cool and it should win!
 80splaidpirate
80splaidpirate on Jan 08 '06
the colours look really awesome together...i like
hound562
hound562 on Jan 08 '06
yes i would look better on a different color than that blue.
krazykat
krazykat on Jan 09 '06
blue is a little bright but threadless can change that after it WINS--woot woot!

i like the red but it does do something wierd to the guy's leg.

but the design is rad.
toastburner
toastburner on Jan 09 '06
Darker blue, maybe lose the red. But groovy.
antiandrewx
antiandrewx on Jan 09 '06
i agree with most people. make it a darker blue and get rid of the red line.



otherwise $4
ms.markee
ms.markee on Jan 10 '06
i love the colors...
killerswamp
killerswamp on Jan 10 '06
I like this a lot. but as stated by everyone, the rectangle of red could be fixed. I like bright colors. Krazy Kat can account for that. lol.
DirtyWisper
DirtyWisper on Jan 11 '06
Perfect background color: DARK GREY. Do it, you can thank me later. Other than that a solid 4!
jazyj
jazyj on Jan 12 '06
cool design but maybe different colours ! i would buy 5$
armorforsleepfan7
armorforsleepfan7 on Jan 12 '06
this shirt is really cool, prob wouldn't get it if it was this color perfect color is def dark grey. 5$
Jennysthebest
Jennysthebest on Jan 12 '06
Not a big fan of the bright blue. The silhouette is fantastic, but the red makes it look like he's propping up his leg on a brick wall!

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