Rap Music
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2336 days ago
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Jan 04 '06
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1.30 from 617 votes
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this is much improved over the "drive-in movie" feel of your original. I still feel like the bubble surrounding the "music" could use some work, but overall, nifty!
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ha ha ha
" a picture is worth a thousand notes " The car and driver need to be more gansta to portray the music as rap. Making the border around the music resemble graffiti would help to do this too. |
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the music notes create a steady beat - they are all sixteenth notes and therefore there is no change in the rhythm (just a little input from a music major...)
i like it otherwise |
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I agree with arethiel about the bubble. Good idea though :)
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it looks more like a homeless guy bumpin' tunes.
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the notes throw me.
i don't like how they're all the same. put an actual beat in there and you may have something. |
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I'd rather listen to 50 cent than whatever you like.
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maybe i'm a little dense, but what are the hammers and cans for?
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yeah, lose the bottom tails on the single notes and you'll have the rhythm you're looking for. Good message but general execution could improve.
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starr226 on Jan 07 '06 I will always love you, Rap Music. Even if no one else does.
Don't tell my other submissions but you're my favorite. You're my secret favorite of all my shirt-y submissions. |
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