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the man looks a bit odd
the either have defined clothes or dont dont go halfway also the shading on the skin looks odd |
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i actually really like the placement of it; i would even put it even more to the bottom and to the right. i also like the size of the graphic
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i love the artwork, perhaps some subtle pale green bits would help lift it too. move the image to bottom right and i'll give you my pennies
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