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Dec 28 '05
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enjoy, alsoi offer the same design with stroked japaneese letters
arethiel
arethiel on Dec 28 '05
I'm afraid my issues with it as I wrote in your blog still stand...
chenj214
chenj214 on Dec 28 '05
its originally chinese letters, but japanese have taken some of those characters to use for their language in kanji too--i like it
Fordrick
Fordrick on Dec 28 '05
I really like the design - 4
uberamour
uberamour on Dec 28 '05
I like this design a lot. I sometimes thing Japenese lettering is a little overused, but I like how it's done here. :D 4
plans
plans on Dec 28 '05
yeah i have to agree with arethiel.... there are some things still not fixed
shwinkie123
shwinkie123 on Dec 28 '05
is that a white shirt? :( how about tan!
mandylion77
mandylion77 on Dec 28 '05
it would be better without the brush or if the brush was angled differently. it kinda looks out of place for some reason o.O
sweetmonkeytuesday
sweetmonkeytuesday on Dec 28 '05
so prety... i like! $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$5
TFMdesign
TFMdesign on Dec 28 '05
what ere the things that needed to be fixed?
.moto.
   .moto. on Dec 28 '05
dunno. $4.50 :)
abeadles
abeadles on Dec 28 '05
Very nice $5
em fu
em fu on Dec 28 '05
This is pretty... aside from the brush, it's got nice balance.



The brush doesn't look like a japanese/chinese calligraphy brush (sorry, don't mean to be anal)



I think it'd be perfectly fine without it



HippieSunrise31
HippieSunrise31 on Dec 28 '05
beautiful. $5.
SFpirate
SFpirate on Dec 28 '05
something other than white... otherwise, cool.
brown_orange_bowl
brown_orange_bowl on Dec 29 '05
ok
linac
linac on Dec 29 '05
i with em fu on the brush
asher27
   asher27 on Dec 29 '05
remove the brush and its a 4.



Hepzibah
Hepzibah on Dec 29 '05
The design is a nice concept, although the brush does look a little out of place... maybe angle it so it looks like it's doing the writing? Right now it looks like it was placed down after the fact... in which case, scoot it away a litle bit from the lines.



It would look best on a cream or beige, I think.
sheppy
sheppy on Dec 29 '05
is anyone bored of chinese or japanese letters that mean harmony, strength, love , peace, joy or any other sappy type thing?



other than that, great design.
WhatThePho
WhatThePho on Dec 29 '05
I like
brokenash
brokenash on Dec 30 '05
I really like the concept but I agree with angling the brush differently. 3

d3d
   d3d on Dec 31 '05
i really prefered the version with the blocky square type, but it's still a very nice design.
Perfect_Baubles
Perfect_Baubles on Dec 31 '05
I like it.

5

the contorted ram
the contorted ram on Jan 01 '06
preeeeeeeeeeeeeeetty colors. 5
Berlin05
Berlin05 on Jan 01 '06
Great color usage!
yoomei
yoomei on Jan 01 '06
I would TOTALLY buy that and wear it. 5. LOVE IT.
enamel
enamel on Jan 02 '06
I hope you know "japanese" is not spelt "japaneese", because you misspelt it on your submission as well as your first comment..



Anyway, I find the design a bit... um... boring? I agree, it's a /nice/ design, but it doesn't really stand out as anything special for me.
plans
plans on Jan 02 '06
well since the word "japaneese" isn't going to be on there anywhere I hardly think it's an issue....



TFM, the things that I was talking about was that the strokes didn't come from the tip of the brush and the end of the stroke gets smaller and bigger and smaller again. I guess if they're not a problem to you don't worry about it but they're the first things I notice. Still, really nice job on this.
shredthrashgrind
   shredthrashgrind on Jan 02 '06
I think the comments on your blog are very worthwhile..
TFMdesign
TFMdesign on Jan 03 '06
i spelt japanese right on the sub..
TFMdesign
TFMdesign on Jan 03 '06
oh the other japanese, eh, i was rushed because it was about to be put up and i emailed craig telling him to replace it with this one because i liked this one alot better. it was a photo finish.
KimiWaPet2150
KimiWaPet2150 on Jan 03 '06
I WANT IT! ^__^

5+$!
RADiOBOMBS
RADiOBOMBS on Jan 03 '06
Like the idea, like the colors. $4 from me.
catdogpigduck
   catdogpigduck on Jan 03 '06
this is horrible
almost emo
almost emo on Jan 03 '06
almost emo
almost emo on Jan 03 '06
good...um YES? yeah good job on the 5$
erikaxqotsoul
erikaxqotsoul on Jan 03 '06
I LOVE THIS DESiGN!
givejon10
givejon10 on Jan 03 '06
love this!!
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