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Runaway by mvr

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1012 days ago

Submitted on:

Dec 27 '05

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1,954 people

Comments:

39 comments

Final average score:

2.58 out of 5

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by mvr

alright, i know there is already a shirt with a toaster and toast on it, so plz dont post a comment with "OMG YOU COPIED!", becuase my shirt doesnt look like that one, it just has a toaster and toast on it, and i really like my design so i really wanted to post it! so, plz no comments about that! thank you! <3

Schnausen on Dec 27 '05

i really really love this. quite possibly one of the cutest pieces of toast i have ever seen is on there. i would buy it if you offered it in black, but it's really cute in blue too. and also, if you made the expressions on their faces just a little bigger, so you could see it better.

arethiel on Dec 27 '05

really like it! Yet at the same time, I feel like there could be a more delineation of the toaster. it looks a little 2-d to me at the moment. Also, as above wrote, make the faces more visible via darkening or thickening or something. They get a little lost at the moment,

Zalo on Dec 27 '05

all you need is jam crying in a corner

mvr on Dec 27 '05

ha ya, taht might be good, thank you all

mister.ugly on Dec 27 '05

omg please print! i would so buy this! $5

go.japan on Dec 27 '05

degrassi on Dec 27 '05

The toasts need to go hang out with the penguins, pandas, and robots already.

DruBear on Dec 27 '05

i love this. $5

sohat on Dec 27 '05

OMG YOU COPIED!

radchc1 on Dec 27 '05

i think this shirt is so cute. i <3 it

radchc1 on Dec 27 '05

tangerineskies45 on Dec 27 '05

I like the 2-D-ness. But make the faces darker (you knew that already).

This is a pretty nice design: there's a LOT you can draw from it, and it doesn't force your brain to discover the artist's intended message. It's simple, but that just makes it more effective. And the expressions... Good job.

mrdeadhead on Dec 27 '05

sloppy looking, but a good concept.
mayber fix it up.

mvr on Dec 27 '05

sloppy? um, i guess so

stillusio on Dec 28 '05

Love the concept, but design needs a little tightening. I don't think the plug is necessary, for example. It looks a little strange. Plus, faces need a bit more emphasis.