Nice work on submitting an abstract. I like the colours, looks like a contemporary stained glass work.

Colors are nice, not sure about the shirt color. The design is too low (for me). Not bad otherwise.

yeah I liek teh design placement could be better though .. I think this would work higher up

Very Mondrian.

You guessed right on the Mondrian. I was going for a more organic-looking variation on his composition style, with different colors. Enjoy, fellow denizens of online alternate communities.

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i think these guys are right. something like this needs to be up higher to catch the eye immediately.

this is an excellent set of colors, and a very interesting & unique idea. i like what you're trying to do. it would be great to see this printed.

I love the scratchiness of hand-drawn submissions:)
I'd like to see one of the blocks coming apart though, or something like that, to give it a bit of movement.
Great colour combo though

1.14—ouch.