Revolution
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Dec 15 '05
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I don't understand why there are fuel drops hanging from the planes. I think it would be much cleaner with out them dangling off.
Looks okay other than that. |
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when's the last revolution that included bombers?
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The airplanes are bleeding?
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i think its like spray paint...
a t shirt with a pose on it, get in!! 5$ |
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I'm not about that nerd. Get an outline who doesnt look anemic.
MAYBE THE GOVERNATOR? |
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Clean up the plane, beef up the guy. It would also be cool to have the word revolution coming out of the design. I like it, its simple
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why are we fighting the enemy with what appear for all the world to be C130 transport aircraft with paint dripping off them....
I don't know about y'all but when i goto attack the enemy by air I usually don't do it with paint dripping transport aircraft. |
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Don't "beef up the guy". Revolutions are started by the underfed. Anyway he isn't thin by any standards other than American.
The stencil-graffiti style of the plnanes doesn't quite match with the outline image. Like it a lot. |
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Ok, so this didnt go as well as planned...
Im getting a distinct drop or change the plane vibe? maybe its just my style but not none of submissions are getting very high results??? So constructive suggestions on how to improve are always welcome! |
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They (the planes) shouldn't have those weird hanging-off things. I don't know what they are. The man's build is fine by me, he looks a tad skinny but I think it's fine, but it bothers me that he has no feet. It's never a good idea to cut a body part out of the illustration.
This is really neat, though, I like it quite a bit, if those things were changed. |
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Jonny, you should probably just stay away from any sort of political idea whatsoever...because everyone starts typing these long unexciting paragraphs discussing politics and its just lame.
Avoid drips. Avoid clipart looking planes like that. I like your background you've got goin there though. Thats kind of cool. |
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To me the design isn't that great. It doesn't stick out, seems not original enough for me. Whether it is or not, I don't know. ..I just wouldn't wear it.
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I'm rather keen on the red accents. It adds a lovely contrast.
I wouldnt but it, but i have a few friends who would love it. So, because of that, I'd say.. $4. Nice work. <33 |
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I wouldn't wear it personally.
I'm envisioning it on anarchists. |
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Yeah i see and understand everybodys comments, thanks for making them...please continue!
In honesty it wasnt meant to be anti establishment, anarchistic, etc... I really liked the whole tear thing and the idea of having a guy kinda behind it but overlapping the top... the guy just looked like he was standing for something and this is what it turned into! i think if the name was different it might not give that impression so much? What do you think? |
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So, everywhere but America is Anemic?
I'm going on an ass-kicking tour of Europe. Nobodies ass is safe. If everyone looks like I could break them by thinking about it, I'm going to be the next Napolean. |
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The design is alright, but it's still a silhouette of a guy and airplanes.
Make a list of the most seen subjects while rating shirts and title it "Do not draw these". |
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I love the tearing part of it, I think that is a really good backdrop, I see no reason why others dont like the aeroplanes. When I first saw it it looked like the person was like telling the aeroplanes to go forward.
I like it, blue is an awesome colour :D |
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i get it.. but why do the planes have long legs. dont they fly?
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i like this design, whatever it's telling me( hey... who cares ? ), it's Cool enuff with a bit to spare!
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anything to do with Camus?
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