Other than the fact that one note is kickin' the crap out of the other, what makes the one note "good music" and the other "bad"?...maybe add halos and horns? black and white ten gallon hats? Dunno...just doesn't explain itself w/o the title.
Also, the white highlights should all be coming from the same light source...instead they both have identical highlights, but the light would be hitting these, albeit cartoon, notes from different angles, thereby creating different highlights.
I agree with simplify, it sends a message but it's kinda jumbled. Maybe if you di d an old VS. new concept involving music genre? Just my opinion on the matter...kinda cliche but that's all I could come up with.
Only becouse a note kiks another note, makes it bad. So the bad music want to kill good music. Music is formed from same musical notes, but the way they are put into the portatives makes it bad. And bad music is in advantage. No genre, just music. Bloody music. That was my first thought.
is bad music at an advantage because it's easier to make it than good music?? but IS it easier?? and what is bad music then anyway?
arrrrhhhhh!!! now you're making me think in circles as well - i think the idea is way too complicated to be represented well by two (seemingly equal - i know, that's the point!) cartoon notes battling it out.
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