Designed by mümmus. Her very first threadless submission. Please leave constructive criticism. Thanküs!

its ok for her first submission, but keep things clean here, I rather have the" mummus" on the tee without bugs and stuff ( cool font)... its ok
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Not bad for a first time submission. I give it $3.

Keep the creative juices flowing!

Yeah, I like this one.

I probably wouldn't wear it, but I still like it.

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Praying Manti are awesome. I like this, but I think you could do that awesome insect more justice by either making it larger or having fewer birds. Good job.

very nice! i'd buy

I love PRaying Manti. I'd buy it just for the sake of having the six-legged bugg on my chest. lovely design, 5$

Love it.

A little busy, but definetly artsy.

I'd wear it for sure.

5.

artsy yes... but when I saw it .. I thought the mantis was eating the bird X__X

I don't like that bird.

i would like it much more if a few things were taken off of the line... i don't like 3 of the same 'mantis, don't like the bird, and don't like that the dragonflies (?) are on the ends like that (it feels too even/square). I'd love it if it were tweaked some.

Lose the dragonflies on the ends, lose at least one of the littler praying manti, and it'd be a 5

great. nice color scheme and use of color. like the line quality and style of the illustration. though I'd like to see a little more movement in terms of scale, such as reducing the size of the dragonflies (and not having them all exactly the same size). the background diagonal line may not be needed, or could perhaps be thinner or less rigid.

nice