Hawk
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Dec 13 '05
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Ditch the geometric shape
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yeah, and not on light blue. definitely on the light olive green
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i like everything but the hexagon.
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to be honest, i didn't like this at all when i first saw it, but i realized it's the hexagon that threw me off, and THEN i realized that the drawing is quite lovely and the colours are really great too. i thought it might do better in a bottom corner instead of centered.
also, i hate light blue t-shirts, and thought it would look better on a soft-coloured T (banana yellow???). have a feeling this isn't a threadless sort of thing, but it would make a nice design otherwise. |
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enamine - who's got that much time to think about a design on your shirt when you're walking by? it either grabs you or you ignore it.
i think ditch the shape. looks like you might have just thrown that around it so you wouldn't have to finish the branch. then i'd say slap a backback on the bird with a bomb in it- and then write the caption "give terrorists the bird." |
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Hmmmm,
Me thinks more shapes around the bird would be an improvement. Shapes they are the way of the Future!! |
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mezo on Dec 14 '05 Boo to the hexagon....
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