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Learning to Draw: Evolution

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Kirt

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by Kirt
My first threadless submission. I tried it with more than one color, but decided I liked the simplicity of this one more.
jennzillakilla
jennzillakilla on Dec 13 '05
haha. i love this.. $ 5
skipcronin
skipcronin on Dec 13 '05
great twist on the tired alterations to the primate evolution progression. i like this one a lot .
Mundo
Mundo on Dec 13 '05
I like it white on the blue/grey...gives it a chalkboard feel.
strongsag
strongsag on Dec 13 '05
haha... nice.
achooee
achooee on Dec 13 '05
hehe...this one is cute.
chkchkchk
chkchkchk on Dec 13 '05
i second the chalkboard feel- but it'd look awesome with chalky looking lines.
staffell
   staffell on Dec 14 '05
In my opinion the second image (stickman) is simpler than the first. If you could switch the two somehow, so that the first image is the stickman's head, and the second image was slightly more complex than that, then i think it could work.
skipcronin
skipcronin on Dec 14 '05
staffell has a good point.
DeadPoetic_Underoath
   DeadPoetic_Underoath on Dec 14 '05
5$
Kirt
Kirt on Dec 14 '05
staffell, you bring up a point that has been mentioned on another forum that I was pimping this design at. And I tend to agree with the critique to some degree.



Although the idea is that most new artists will start with drawing just an oblong head before moving onto stickmen, I think a fix that may be suitable would be to remove the hair from the first and add it to the second. Maybe an ear or fingers as well?



I appreciate everyone's comments here so far. Thank you.
GLASSMATCHES
GLASSMATCHES on Dec 14 '05
i like it when you call me "big papa"
td1186
td1186 on Dec 14 '05
fix the first 2 and its a buy for me =]
bedosb2
bedosb2 on Dec 15 '05
haha, the third guy looks like the logo for PBS. cute!
Lars Martin
Lars Martin on Dec 16 '05
kirt, staffell;

I think removing the nose from the first face would be the best way to solve the problem. To me that's what makes that one "too complex". Even only removing the nostrils would help a lot.



$five if you fix that :) - well done! like all the colors too
skippyelephant
skippyelephant on Dec 17 '05
I like this a lot. This is exactly how I think too. 5$
vivalakelsi
vivalakelsi on Dec 18 '05
Ha. Nice.



I love the idea.

Not so into the kiddish drawings though.



Very clever.
Startxp05
Startxp05 on Dec 18 '05
the robot reminds me of Bender!
dont_cry_ophelia
dont_cry_ophelia on Dec 18 '05
The drawings are a little too childish for me...but I guess that's the point, isn't it?
canadarocks
canadarocks on Dec 18 '05
i like it. the only way you could make it a little better, is if you like change the style as it progresses. like the last one could be shaded or something. other than that it's awesome.
the_boxkite
the_boxkite on Dec 19 '05
i think the first head should be a uncomprehensible scribble. as in the FIRST thing you ever draw. Otherwise.....word. 3
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