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smok by leil

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Dec 13 '05

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34 comments

Final average score:

1.83 out of 5

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i really like it.

WiggidyWack on Dec 13 '05

Nudeness is being overdone latley, its allright though

Doc Daneeka on Dec 13 '05

tasteful use of nudity and good design.

Noxie on Dec 13 '05

Nude women on T shirts are almost as overdone as profile women with flowy hair. Time for something really original. Nude isnt edgy anymore.

wainwrightmedia.com on Dec 13 '05

wake up and smell the vaginas people.... nude women will never go out of fashion. now go and finger paint some flowers like good little kiddies.

Dalapsta on Dec 13 '05

I'd like it if she weren't smoking, i dunno i guess that just ain't my style

steve_swartz on Dec 13 '05

a naked woman on the toilet smoking a cigarette....

being constructive, since you have colors to spare, i think you made a good decision in not showing us the actual toilet.

Jennyfurrr03 on Dec 13 '05

^lol. I wouldn't wear it, but I kinda like the design, dunno why.

kidcreate on Dec 14 '05

eh, who said she's nude?she could be in short shorts?! and where'd that toilet idea come from? she couldbe sitting on anything. I love how people jump to assuptions on threadless and go off on one.
design is nice, maybe a little more detail and a couple more colours for depth. that said its your aesthetic.

fancy on Dec 14 '05

Not a smoker... and I don't advocate it... but I like the design. She does look like she's on a toilet, but then I think that's the fantastic point of it.

I like things that make women look more real and less like a fantasy. I'd buy it.

Ma1agate on Dec 14 '05

Love the hair, love the composition, but the lines definetly need work. Line segments floating in the air don't help the minimalist look you're going for. Connect some, eliminate others. Some areas of shadow would really help.

Looks sketchy, and not in a good way. This really has potential to be great, though.

I like the impression of nudity it gives while being tasteful and not trying to be sexy. I'd love to see a revision. Keep trying!

hoorah on Dec 14 '05

it looks like she's wearing a dress or something to me.
or maybe her knees are just weird.

HeatherMarie on Dec 14 '05

It made me think of toilets too

arivalintango on Dec 14 '05

toilet aside, i'm pleased to see this because women portrayed realisticly and slightly drab are refreshing. i hardly ever see nude, so i disagree with the overdone comment. nude is always nice.

rainbow+++FIRE<3 on Dec 14 '05

i dont think it really matters if shes nude or not. i dont think thats the point of the design. i think it just gives it more of the effect of being nude and having a ciggerate. makes it more .... idk better. and i would totally buy the tshirt.

samanthaalison on Dec 14 '05

I agree with the person who criticized your lines...they need work. other than that, it looks great. good concept, very minimal, 5.

Denn Da Man on Dec 14 '05

Booo!!! Smoking kills people

GLASSMATCHES on Dec 14 '05

this is lovely.
id spend money on something like this.

wubbawubba275 on Dec 14 '05

as a peice of art, nice. But as a shirt, it's alright. still great, though

bicentennialman on Dec 14 '05

Not something I'd wear on a shirt. Put on my wall, but not on a shirt.

DelgadoArt on Dec 15 '05

i personally wouldnt buy this because I dont endorse smoking...but the design and image rock...

whisper in water on Dec 16 '05

Yeah, I'm not a fan of the dashed-line style you've got goin' on here. I'd prefer a more bold, assertive stroke.
But, don't change the shirt for me because I wouldn't buy it anyway. Not my style, especially because of the whole smoking thing.

Eddy Winsworth on Dec 16 '05

I just need a white on black version and I'll take it.

enamine on Dec 16 '05

i was going to say the same thing as Ma1agate - if you're going for contour lines, make them contour lines (i.e. one here, one there). if you're going for whole outlines, make them whole outlines, but now it sort of screams connect-the-dots to me.

i'm not a big fan of real-people-on-shirts anyway, but the drawing is pretty good otherwise.

SomethingVague on Dec 17 '05

blah. i could stencil that myself really easily.

61u3_3y35 on Dec 17 '05

how about pink? and maybe the drawing could be a little more thicker?

Zickwolf on Dec 17 '05

pretty girls w/ cigs = ugly

Heffer on Dec 17 '05

Enough with the naked emo girls. It's not artsy, or deep. What's witht he lost lines on the legs? Not only is the concept empty, but the execution is lacking.

electronically on Dec 17 '05

Never.

fockafino on Dec 18 '05

I like how the girl comes into the frame, and part of her is out. The idea looks good here, but what will it look like on the side of the t-shirt? I'll want to walk around the side of you to see the rest of the design.

betsuni04 on Dec 18 '05

i dunno if i'd like a shirt with a naked michael jackson impersonator on it.

no bueno.

TheHannahSyndrome on Dec 19 '05

I think it's cool... regardless of what everyone else said.
It's really creative, and very artistic.
Maybe it'd look cool with smoke drifting upwards... just an idea.

imperfection101 on Dec 19 '05

to me it looks like she's being erased away.. lost.. real.. she looks kind of dirty to me but the pigtails scream lost childhood. ha. i don't know. i don't think it's advocating smoking.. i think it's more sad.. that's just my interpretation.. overall, i like it alot..

_pixelchick_ on Dec 20 '05

the face and the hair look great, but it looks like you didn't spend as much time on her body and it's done in a totally different style.. it looks a little sloppy and inconsistant..

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