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Dec 09 '05
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Luke...
About my design
by Luke...   
Random thoughts often provoke random ideas for random people...
this design is kinda open to your own random thoughts...so think randomly and give me some random comments....';]
label
   label on Dec 09 '05
I love it... very smooth!
:D
i-choic
i-choic on Dec 09 '05
end of the road? ur either threatening someone, or you really depressed. but the colors would probably suggest a coming to jesus time for someone. which could mean someone just got off'd or is fainting after hearing the old Boyz II Men song. which is something i think i would probably do because of the desert heat. that's y there's all those circles? or maybe it a horrible acid trip, a` la the doors. "this is the end, beautiful friend, this is the end, my only friend, the end.... then end.... the end........................"

those r my random thoughts... $5
funkie fresh
   funkie fresh on Dec 09 '05
yea!
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Dec 09 '05
yeah this is really cool I love teh fade out on teh boxes
plans
plans on Dec 09 '05
Very nice. I like how smooth it is.

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travis76
   travis76 on Dec 09 '05
my favorite part is actually the blue pattern work. done so well, i didn't even realize it was transitional...
JenniThePirate
JenniThePirate on Dec 09 '05
cool! I want this shirt.
iskevindead
iskevindead on Dec 09 '05
it seems like it isn't done.

i'd like it if the bubbles and clouds expanded up and down on the shirt, but not all of it.

maybe like a trail.

the idea is very good.
5
greenfoo
greenfoo on Dec 09 '05
its the answer to stairway to heaven!
pawn18
pawn18 on Dec 09 '05
pretty
littlem
littlem on Dec 10 '05
I like it, the colors are really refreshing:)
theDivineX
theDivineX on Dec 10 '05
awesome makes me feel nice and cool
Stevethegreat
Stevethegreat on Dec 10 '05
this is fantastic
0712
0712 on Dec 11 '05
i like the square pattern.
Luke...
   Luke... on Dec 12 '05
thanks everyone for the great comments, glad to see that some of the irony of this design is working out... i was playing with alot of open ended meanings, hoping that it left the fun in the interpurtation.
kendrick
kendrick on Dec 12 '05
i dont like the end because then people would ask me what it means but if its just a prtty disign then cool
Luke...
   Luke... on Dec 12 '05
if someone were to ask you what this design meant...
your best reply would be:
"what does it mean to you?"

and it is always fun to answer a difficult question with another equally difficult question...
Arnett
Arnett on Dec 12 '05
i take it as the end is coming.... but you expressed the end in a happy way ... i love it would def. pay for it on sale or not =) your getting a 5 and a $ rock on
geekor
geekor on Dec 13 '05
I love bubbles!! I'd buy that for $5!
canadarocks
canadarocks on Dec 13 '05
random
Kannon
Kannon on Dec 13 '05
I'd like to take this moment to say hi to geekor. Hi geekor!

-I felt as though I was going to run off a cliff, gently though, as if I might float instead of fall. Like a slow-motion suicidal bubble ride. Too bad I stopped wearing clothes. Neat shirt.
jedibamf
jedibamf on Dec 13 '05
love love love love it 5$
ghiggins
ghiggins on Dec 14 '05
Its simplereal chill. Not in your face like every T shirt out there and its open ended. It's really light with deep undetones. End is apretty suggestive word.

Me Like

GH
strangewomenlyinginponds
strangewomenlyinginponds on Dec 14 '05
nice, I like that you actually have colors that match each other in tone.
namelesskid
namelesskid on Dec 14 '05
um....i dont get it...the end of WHAT? cheers
tonytom
tonytom on Dec 15 '05
I think it's great. It reminds me someone whose just about to hit the wall. You know, someone who's great looks and ass are just about to go south. The END sign is the last thing they see before smacking into the the wall which reflects like a bright mirror that good, shiny life they'll never have the same way again. I like it.
CheesecakeBree
CheesecakeBree on Dec 15 '05
I really love this. It's so simple yet... complex. The colors just work so well together too. I'll be disappointed if it doesn't get printed!
xenocide
xenocide on Dec 15 '05
I love love love this.
Luke...
   Luke... on Dec 15 '05
big giant bowls full of 'thank-yous' to everyone for the kind words...
i am glad many of you are seeing the different levels to a seemingly simple concept&design...i am very happy that you are enjoying it. as i would reeeally like to see this one printed...
jessalinb
jessalinb on Dec 16 '05
I think the circles in the background are too prominent, they aren't doing enough design-wise to be as bold as they are. I'd either cut down on the line width, or try placing them a little more carefully. They distract me...or maybe its the whole thing--just a little too random for my taste. I get the impression that you went with its randomness without it having any meaning to you, and I wonder if it can have any meaning to anyone else for the same reason.

Maybe I'm wrong.

?
Luke...
   Luke... on Dec 16 '05
jessalinb:
it was meant to be a bit cluttered...somewhat dream-like.
yes it was created to have meaning, but i designed it so that it would be vague enough that the viewer could interject his own ides into it.

the circles needed to be placed somewhat randomly so as not to add another story element. they can mean alot of things...but they are there to add more of a feeling...hopefully a confusion...since they are all over the place and kinda crazy looking and even going over the edge, i thought they would confuse....
while the circles confuse, the orderly and systematically breaking up of the sky by squares is both calming to that confusion, and adds another element to the story...it is a peaceful sky that is breaking apart, yet it is still peaceful, so there is a calmness to the design [which the colors also support]...

then you throw in the very bold road sign 'end', which is where the 'circles of soft confusion' are their most abudant, and also where the breaking of the sky starts or ends, depending on how you look at it. the sky is peaceful after the end, or it is peacful before the end...but there is a definite 'change'...

and to sum it all up, you can see this design wasnt created to have a specific message, but to convey and evoke emotions and concepts in a very abstrat way.
i think it was done successfully, and if it causes you to think then it was very successful.
circa-forever
circa-forever on Dec 16 '05
aesthetically this design is nice-
but I do think there is a lack of concept/content...
enough to engage the brain, but not enough to take it anywhere..

hope thats not too harsh :?
Luke...
   Luke... on Dec 16 '05
well i didnt want the design to take you somewhere, i wanted the viewer to make up his/her own mind as to where to go...this was just a starting point, or rather the 'ending point'....
21 days later
penpal
penpal on Jan 06 '06
love the design of the white breaking up the blue....thicker to thinner..very cool, love the squares
425 days later
doesthatmakemeahippie...
doesthatmakemeahippie... on Mar 07 '07
Just found this design, was it ever printed? LOVE IT :) It makes me feel like I'm snapping out of a day dream, which sets me into one trying to remember what it was. I could stare at this for hours.
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