Utility pole is a very useful and frequent part of the landscape.



Comments/criticisms appreciated.

Another nice illustration. not sure if they can print that close to the edge and neckline, but it'd look wrong if the lines ended anywhere else.

i found everything in that yellowish orange color to be a bit distracting,



maybe just black&white?

The lines, the illustration of the telephone pole, very nice, but what happened when you got to the birds? There is little to no detail in them, I’d like to see either detail or removal, or if you wanted to be lazy just make them better silhouettes.

i like how the birds are just yellow silhouettes because it makes them stand out from the tree and the pole

My friend has a shirt exactly like that, just different colors. I even told him it looked like something from Threadless.



Its nice though,3.

Oh snap, it's up already? That's like a 10 hr waiting period...

Anyway, had the drawing for something else, didn't work out, so I tweaked it to might fit the comp.

Birds and plane are undetailed/dif color to get em to pop and relate together separate from pole/tree.

Grass is there because it looked hell-a stupid just floating.

yeah grayehound, if they can't print to edges, I'm not sure what could be done.

I like it. Could do without the plane though. 4

The compositon and detail do a great job

focusing our attention on the utillity pole.

Yellow is good at grabbing attention

which ends up making the grass, birds,

and plane compete with the pole. My

suggestion is to substitute a cool color

with the yellow ( a warm color ). Light

blue would do the trick with the plane

and birds. I'm not a fan of the grass.

I thought it was text at first glance.

Maybe a contoured brown line of varying

thickness to represent the ground.



I really like how your design expresses

how man can dominate nature ( wires

and plenty of attachments ) for his

benefit without destroying it ( the tree

is still alive since its roots are alive

and kicking ).



Great design, danrule !

By the way, I like the design's

placement and how the locations

of the ends of the wires are not

floating in the air. They made

it to the edge of the viewable area

on the front.

Thanks helo, I am not averse to changing the colors to a cool color, maybe later I will and post them somewhere.

Not averse? Sorry, let me try that again..I am OPENMINDED to changing the colors...

Well, I'm new here, but this is definitely my favorite design yet. I would buy one right now if I could.

i like this heaps. great drawing. hope it prints ok if it comes to that.

I love the ambiguity of the birds, but why yellow?

Change the colours, I beg of you and I will buyyy.

I really like this

Ahh..fantastic! 5$

thats an excellent illustration. 4/5!

OK, just clickity-click on my name to see a dif color for the objects.



I couldn't go cool, so I went beige.

Correction,

see color change here;

http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/4764/679/1600/utility-light-brown.gif

Awesome design. It makes me think of "Serial Experiments: Lain," and that's awesome too.

I like it.

yes your color corrections are much better, I agree with helo completely. I still think the ground line is slightly problematic, it does look like it might be text. But i really do LOVE this shirt, its deliciously unexpected.

kool 4$

but it 's too late to rate....:(

I love your work. LOVE IT TO DEATH. 5 and buy if the color is changed.

it's awesome

i like this design,good thinking.