the post above makes no sense. "does it for me to generic?"
what's wrong with the color restriction? (ie., what is it you would have changed?)
the little palm tree and the drips are really cute and good choice of color for the shirt : ).
the waveline is very subtle, i like that a lot.
i dunno, the lines on the cone would be a darker orange instead of the same color as the sand, and id put those stereotypical light green zigzags on the palm tree leafs. i guess you're all right about the tweaking, but can you be a bit more specific so i know what to change? thanks for all your comments : )