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This is our first submission and we would love it if you would tell us what you think. Please be gentle on us.
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I'd make both people a little more defined. I almost overlooked the lady in the tower the first time because I just thought it was an extension of the tower.
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...I saw it kind of as a Mario looking to save the princess kinda thing.
... But yeah, the serious stuff works, too. |
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Switch sides for the prince and the castle
so the prince has to travel from left to right. Then have the exit path spelling out "I luv U" |
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I agree that left to right is more natural to read, but I don't think the exit path needs to spell anything out. I really like this concept.
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i agree with the dead ends till you find real love! i think there should be some dragons and trees inside the heart in a few places, to show theres some obsticles. ;)
NICE THO. 4+$ |
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This is great! I love the idea, but I do agree that somehow the princess could be a bit more obvious.
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