pretty cool. it kinda looks like shes um...well...got something in the croch that shouldn't be there...sorry.X(

cool design, if it wasn't for the astounding clam.

Yeah, I would remove that bulge from her crouch. But other than that, it's a good drawing.

Yay for a girl ninja shirt! But yes, the vagina lines have got to go.

nice balls.

Damn crotch lines well its too late now I suppose.

I will buy this shirt if the crotch marks are removed.
Love the the drawing and concept!!!
$5

Awesome. $5 (except for the crotch lines, mind you)

i was also wondering if you could make the right hand a little less boxy and a little more feminine.

aside from what everyone else says, the way she is holding the sword is very akward, my two cents is have her resting it over her right shoulder, blade up of course. and i'd vote for a black or red tee.

Great illustration, minus the crotch lines. I think you'll lose some in your average score for those, which is a shame because you could take them out easily if told you were going to be printed.

i think the design is really good! the crotch lines dont bother me..thats what happens when someones sitting like that..i guess cus the white is so defined thats whats probably throwing it off. but its a cute drawing and i would like to see it on a tee.

She ummm got some big lips down... WELL ANYWAY. Lol
Great design! Just reflect the the bulges the other way which would make it more of a panty line, realisticly Penpal is right but as a illustrators we can cheat. If u win you can always change it.lol
4

PUFFY VAG!

ya just know she's saying "i KILLED the last guy who made fun of my crotch lines."

good drawing, Pukagurl. I'll mark it how i would if there were no you-know-whats 'coz i think you already realize if you win they'd have to be the first things to go. haha.

cameltoe, anyone..? but seriously, its a very nice, stylized drawing. different tee color would be nice, but I know you can change that later. the way she's sitting, though, makes it look like she fell backwards and caught herself on her hand. put her in a crouching position and i'd buy!

nice graphic,,

but her position just looks a bit off to me. (i agree with kikiroki... try making her in a crouching position, as if she's ready to spring in action.)

& i never knew girls had balls. (they draw too much attention.)

the creases in the crotchal area look a little too much like an incredibly loose, gaping vag.

Well If it gets printed the crotch lines will go bye bye. Well I dont think a red tee would be good if the blood is red.

hey... poofy coochies are fine by me.. i love this picture :) and i actually like her possition considering she wouldnt be in a pouncing pose after shes already killed her prey :P id buy it for sure!

hey great idea tho pity about the camel toe, plus I'd round off the knees if your gonna re submit, makes her look more curvey. 3

Thank you Mrs Kittie exactly. She is not in striking position shes in I just killed some fool pose. I like her pointy knees. A camel toe is when the pants are going into the vagina (I) hers just looks poofy Im so used to making film for screen prints I was thinking that they would be less noticibal once the ink bled a little bit .

neat shirt.... even though shes packing double heat.

two swords- one in the hand and one in the pants
ill buy it if you clean up her crotch a little

Consider the crotch lines gone! Imagine nooooo crothch lines...they do not excist is anyone going to read this?

Um, penpal, no, that is NOT what your average woman's crotch looks like when she's sitting like that. I'm not sure what those lines were meant to represent. But it doesn't matter, because now we know they will be removed if it gets printed. Which is way cool. :)

can we lose the package?

You haven't figured it out that it's not a lady ninja, but a ladyboy ninja, hence the bulge.

I agree with se5k. 4 because at first I thought she was slashing her own throat.

Not that I like the crotch lines, but I'm not seeing why everyone thinks it looks like a guy's package. We females do have this thing called a 'vulva', guys... ::eyeroll::

...Granted, hers is pretty large... but it still looks female. Funny how unnatural-looking breasts get by just fine, but the crotches better be lifelike, God damn it.

does she have nuts?

her camel toe is a liiitttle distracting

good concept
but all together..
she looks.. kinda awkward.
like.. the way she's sitting and the way she's holding her sword
makes me uncomfortable just by looking at her.

Its nice just loose that...uhh....thing on her crotchy there. : )
Other then that though id give it a uhh 4

you should try to do a different hand position for her left hand [ ninjagirl/boy whatever's point of view] make her fingers spread out or something it looks odd like that , like shes rubbing the blood on the ground or something.

Camel toes can happen to anyone, even ninja chicks. Way to represent!

People use the term "concept" too loosely. This really doesn't have a concept, you fools, and you likely have no idea what conceptual art actually is. This is every piece of shit cartoon-y drawing I dispise. It's even tied in maso-artist crap. As a girl, I'm offended.

Im a girl Im not offended and Im a cartoonist still not offened ,oh wait i drew this of course Im not offended. Can you offend your self is it possible? Who says the shirts have to have meaning and looks to me like most of you like the illustration that makes me smile aside from her "puffy vag lips" which again would be removed if it were ever printed :) Also how can you say someones piece has no concept how would anyone but the artist know what the "comcept" is.hmmmmmmm.Im unfamiliar with the term maso-artist. This was actually from a larger piece I did requested by the guy who made my website and he loved it and thats all that matters. I love how people use the internet to lash out in anger at others to try and make them feel bad about themselevs or to make them think that they are less of a peron or something. Whats that song line "always love hate will get you everytime"

i thought this needed a little positive feedback..because honestly, if someone has made a criticism, especially if the artist has SAID they would fix it, there is no need to KEEP repeating it over and over. so...i love the eyes and the hairpiece, and the expression and stance are really well done. if there is one thing i would change, it would be the shoulders...they don't seem to be continuous where the sword cuts them off. but great job!! keep up the good work!!

Real cool but umm all of the above comments pretty much say what i want to say, But not as mean. You are a great drawing keep it up!

Just like everybody else.... without the crotch lines I would so buy this!

If the crotch lines were lost, I'd buy it. Also, I think the people who mentioned the placement of the sword may have a point, it does look a bit odd. If she was holding it so the blade was up behind her, it would stop it looking like she could cut her own throat, and also make her look more threatening as if she's ready to strike again. Nice job though. :)

yeah, put my vote in for "re-submit without crotch lines"! Other then that, good design!

I concur. Cool design, but less emphasis on the crotch area.
I like the bits of red on her hairsticks though, those add variety.
Her neck seems a tad bit long, though if you put the sword behind her shoulders and raised the shoulders as bit that might help. Play with a few of the suggestions everyone's mentioned, see how it looks. Overall very cool.

Thanks everyone great and helpful critiques I will go back and re work it.

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