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 paper + pen = interactivity
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I guess I was hoping the post-its would be funny or interesting. The english sounds weird and disjointed.
Nice concept 3. |
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^^"Suprise I'm pregnant" is rather interesting to have written on a post-it. I don't think most people would be so flippant about it.
I do wish the other post its were as intersting. The pen disappers because it isn't solid. If you want it noticed, color it in. If you don't want it noticed, I'd say just take it out. |
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lol That's how I'll announce I'm preggers to my partner if I ever get preggers - on a post it! lol
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I like the concept. I don't really like what's written on the post its.
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yeah... the english is not so well.
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;p sorry for my english, but I'm french so it's no so easy !
So if there 's somebody who want to give me the real words contact me :) |
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+5 but i'll never give you the real words
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AHAHAH Kab U're a bad guy (John Mc Clane inside !) give me them
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my shopping list doesn't usually have 4 beverages and peanut butter on it, maybe that's a french thing. I like your idea, but the english could be better, tho i have to admit it's kind of more funny this way.
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I agree with ' Felicity_Josiah' verbatim. 3 is a good score for this.
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So I work again on my design and change the sentences
see it on : http://www.2m-at-work.com/index.php?p=portfolio&type=graph# it's the firts work on the top left corner. thx |
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I like the sentences better on your revision, but I still don't think it's the best idea for a shirt.
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i think it's interesting. definately a 5. i personally prefer the first revision better. the concept needs the pen and the difference between the trivial notes (grocery list) and the important one (preggers) to keep it balanced and interesting. good work.
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thx mattylee for your comment
As U can see there are manies different opinions, so... ptv for me postit is cool, it's change from computer or usb design. I find something kind in my design :) |
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I love this concept, but is english your second language? The stickies are in weird words! O.o (3)
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simster 214 I say before I'm fench...so english is not my first language
My tailor is not rich :) http://www.2m-at-work.com/index.php?p=portfolio&type=graph# the new sentences |
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The only part I'm in love with is the strange english. A shirt full of post-its with unusual english written on would be GREAT!!!
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i love the new version ... the sentences are hilarious and i think it is funnier b/c of the effect of the disjointed translation. very clever and nice graphics, too --- it has a very absent-minded professor who refuses to use a computer kind of feel to it...
i want one! :-) $5 for the new version |
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I think it's a great idea! I don't think it even really matters what it says on the post-its. I think having it say innocuous things that you don't really notice would work...
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Ouh Yéééh !
j'adore... sympa ton visu mike ! +5 ! |
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get rid of the pregnant one. make the post its funny. get some other colored shirts too.
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why did i just read all that. boo.
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miam :):):)
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the pregnant lady crashed her car o noooooo
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aren't u a clever little chap, like it does feel a bit like creative review
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graymangaz, show me others graphic design with post it !!
I'll try to do my best, and especially I make it for pleasure :) U can do not love it "chap", there are people who like it ! |
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Hey, I love the idea. It reminds me of my own family. Haha. We always have like 20598 post-it notes on the cabinets. Just fix the English and I think I'd be fantastic.
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It would be fantastic, not "I'd". Sorry.
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So help me to write the right sentences ! let me a comment with the real words or email me :)
thx rustedromancex ! |
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Well, there's no Grand, PA. You might try Normal Square, PA -- it's about a hundred miles due west of NYC.
RAM comes in Gigabytes, nowadays. You don't think of "garage owners" so much as "home owners". "Today" isn't as exclamistic as "Surprise", so, I'd move the punctuation down a bit. But that probably doesn't really help.... |
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I like the idea coz I am always having post-its around my PC.
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Thx steve swartz : i notice that before :
" I work again on my design and change the sentences see it on : http://www.2m-at-work.com/index.php?p=portfolio&type=graph# it's the firts work on the top left corner." coffee pls like me ^^ |
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I like the revision. =)
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Pretty okay. 3. Funny, but its just too okay.
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I really like the Post-Its and the "Surprise! I'm pregnant!", but... uh...
not much else? |
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yeah, i *do* need another 512 ddr ram ... (this t-shirt is a giant nonsequitur and I would buy as is! ha HA)
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I agree with what most people are saying
i like the idea, a lot but whats on the post-its should be funnier or more real |
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Dieses ist was ich denke, meine eigene Meinung - looks like my fridge.
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