The eyes and mouth confuse
more than help us see the
foosball player. Also the bar
isn't connected to guy's right
shoulder. I thought the bar
might be a dash which led me
to think for a second the yellow
swoosh could be a large yellow C.
Since you're only using 3 colors
why not use a light brown to fill
in the areas where the ball traveled.
The text and player would be filled
in and the motion of the ball would
still be intact.
Even though I'm poking at the design
this is the best foosball design I've ever
seen and I would buy it with the
improvements.
Holy crap, I want this shirt very badly. That's a 5$, whether the design objectively merits it or no. A few tweaks and it would. Clarify, but very very carefully. Perhaps connect the bar on the right shoulder?
But, the design is decent- I see what you are going for. Try to make the figure look more like a foozeball player. Right now, it doesn't come off as such & you have to red your text to "get it".
thanks for the feedback. the player is based on the cyclone ll table, and the players have 2 dots for the eyes and a smile. super simple,
happy to make tweaks.
Love it but i think it would be better if you cut the 2nd "foos it", so it said foos it or loos it, as ooposed to FOOS IT foos it or loos it...you know?
wamboni
I love foos ball. Cute design. 4
vebberts
At first I didn't get that it was a foosball guy (I'm kinda slow today). He looks like Mr. Hankey, the Christmas poo. :) I still dig it though.
mikemills
I'M your daddy...
helo
The eyes and mouth confuse
more than help us see the
foosball player. Also the bar
isn't connected to guy's right
shoulder. I thought the bar
might be a dash which led me
to think for a second the yellow
swoosh could be a large yellow C.
Since you're only using 3 colors
why not use a light brown to fill
in the areas where the ball traveled.
The text and player would be filled
in and the motion of the ball would
still be intact.
Even though I'm poking at the design
this is the best foosball design I've ever
seen and I would buy it with the
improvements.
streetwise
Thanks for the feedback, great thoughts for easy tweaks.
Strohmer
love the color combination. like how the foosball man is not so literal.
makes me want to go kick it on the table!
EmilyRae
FOOSBALL SHIRT ! AWESOME !
amorforhenry
what?
WEContact
Holy crap, I want this shirt very badly. That's a 5$, whether the design objectively merits it or no. A few tweaks and it would. Clarify, but very very carefully. Perhaps connect the bar on the right shoulder?
Also, more colors for the text and foosball man?
mezo
I prefer boozeball...
But, the design is decent- I see what you are going for. Try to make the figure look more like a foozeball player. Right now, it doesn't come off as such & you have to red your text to "get it".
streetwise
thanks for the feedback. the player is based on the cyclone ll table, and the players have 2 dots for the eyes and a smile. super simple,
happy to make tweaks.
Jordando
Love it but i think it would be better if you cut the 2nd "foos it", so it said foos it or loos it, as ooposed to FOOS IT foos it or loos it...you know?
streetwise
that's true...like that.
starsAREForeverX
maybe im slow but i thought it was a big yellow C too.... i agree about filling in the area where the ball traveled. other than that i dig it!
streetwise
the "C" is a graphic motion -- see. (-;
G Rock
it's the shizzle for fooz daddies like me, i needs sum uh dis, when you print, i be buyin and sellin! word to ya designuh man
dskirsch
footastic!!!
timmons64
foos shirts are few and far between lets have it
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