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The cigarette kinda looks like a half empty (or half full) class of beer.
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The idea is nice but the truth is the cigarette looks not like a cigarette.
I would change its shape (longer or thinner) and put also some face characteristics (eyes for example) |
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Nice idea. If you couldn't see the title, you probably wouldn't know it was a cigarette. It's because of the perspective. It curves down on the top, curves up on the bottom, and the butt line is cut square. You need to have a full oval at the top and the butt line needs to curve up like the bottom of the cigarette.
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It doesn't look enough like a cigarette and you could lose the pile of people in the middle.
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this is not great.
whats with these anti smoking t shirts...... people smoke, they probbaly realise the dangers. They dont need gooder than good types wearing t shirts to remind them |
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as regards me: nice idea, dude. Nevermind if smokers can feel personallyu touched (why????): just fix/redefine illustraions problems: the cigarette looks like a low charge battery..
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big fan of the idea, however someone who didnt see the title, might not know its a cigarette.
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the cig looks a bit like a urine sample. needs to have a smouldering tip, i think. and maybe some smoke coming out the gun mimicing the smoke that should ideally be coming out the cig?
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I LOVE IT! lol
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alright, make some changes to the cigarette to make it look more smokeable, hah, and then i would totally wear it.
WHILESMOKING. jesus, i love it. no, really. id make the gun look a little more menacing, though. allinall, a nice idea. |
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kickass.
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doesnt look like a cig...
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looks more like a mostly empty long cylindrical glass of beer
(i would like some beer.) i agree with macster people who smoke already KNOW its not damn healthy. do they care? no. living past 60 doesnt sound like rainbows and sunshine anyway. the execution is bad, anyway. |
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i used anyway twice. well, that sucks.
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the cig dosnt look like one as others have said make hte end burning and give it a sort of menacing face or something
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not a fan of the obviousness of your message.
but if you must keep it, make cig slimmer and smoking. message is a bit heavy handed but i'm sure some simpletons will find it deep. good luck. |
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DeadPoetic_Underoath on Nov 25 '05 HAHA COOL!
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ahahahhahaha
that's hilarious It needs some work on it, though. Everyone else already pointed out the criticisms I thought of. |
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i agree. lose the people. four.
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thats a really really fat cigarette.
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I like it a lot, but personally, I'd make the gun more defined (esp in the grip), and use another color or two for smoke from the gun, flecking (that sort of polygonal texture that the paper on cigarettes have, maybee only in the yellow aprt), angry/evil eyebrows + eyes, and... i'm not a big fan of the shape, but i'd be careful not to over-do the slenderizing, and i don't think that you need the pile of ppl
excellent design .. $4 |
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It looks like a pill...
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I like the idea of the message. Make the cig look like a cig, and maybe make it easier to see what it means.. like a cigarette decapitating someone. It just looks like a cig pointing to a dog pile of people.
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Cigarettes killed my father, and raped my mother!
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^ whoever that is, great family guy reference. Really cool idea, and the style is right in my ballpark. 5 and buy.
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Improve the cig and maybe just one dead body.
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Haha I loveeeeee it.
I won't tell you about the whole cigarette thing because everyone has like a million times. Sheesh isn't once enough, you know? Haha. Five dudeee |
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great message, but the illustration could use a little work. the cigarette is too short and fat and the pile of bodies is a bit oddly shaped, especially on the bottom. it could be clearer what's going on with a little work.
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the cigarette doesn't look like a cigarette.
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^exactly, the proportions are off.
too fat or too short. |
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I thought the cigarette was a glass of beer, too.
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I think it would help if you made the cigarette lit with some smoke cuz it does kinda look like a half full glass of beer or piss.
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the ONLY i would change would be...
smoke on the cig. and a line on the cig between the end and the filter. 4$ |
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the cigarette looks a bit like a band-aid.
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mezo on Nov 29 '05 Clearly, the artist has never seen a cigarette...or gun...or feet, hands...
The bodies look like an ink stain. |
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SMOKE OUT OF THE CIG AND GUN JOINING TO A BLACK CLOUD OF POLLUTION ABOVE ALL OF IT.
THAT WOULD MAKE IT COMPLETE. |
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bit preachy
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Pretty simple, just an idea I was playing with.