My first threadless design. Just something thats been floating around my head for a while.

A bigger image can be found here, so you can see the image on the back: http://www.deviantart.com/view/25163440/

Don't like the scratchy raindrop.
Make it black maybe, Raindrop blue, and the girl pink.
It's original but not very interesting.

I like the idea, but I would make the follwing changes:

Make the raindrop look more like it is "falling"

Draw the girl on the front more like the raindrop and the one on the back. Her (and especially the umbrella) look very stylized, while the raindrop and the drenched girl look very natural

Please keep submitting. : )

i love the idea VERY MUCH...but the pic of the girl shouldnt be so stencil-like....you should make her similar to be boy behind...which is un-stencil-ed =p i dont mind the scratchy-ness of the raindrop actually...i think its cool

Very nice, but a tiny cloud above would be cool. Also the girl on theback dripping wet would be better with a broken umbrella... I look forward to more

i would like it if the girl was in the scratchy style also

LISA
i like it.
but i still think the girl shoud have a sketchy style too.

Great concept - I think this could be a threadless shirt!
I agree with the comments above.

Since she has an umbrella in the first sequnce she should have a broken tangled looking umbrella on the back. I just think it would pull the two images togther. : ) (oh and I just realized someone else said that before pressing post)

Good luck!!
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Sweet shirt. Although I agree with what people said about the mixed styles not really working together. Do it all in one style, and I like the broken umbrella idea.

Good design though :) Submit more!

i like the sketchy type of the raindrop, maybe the girl in that style, too? and i like the idea the people above had with the image on the back being wet with a broken umbrella..

Ah! great title and a nice shirt to match.

I like the concept a lot.
I would like it much better if the raindrop and the girl were the same style, I really like the rough style of the raindrop.
And I like the broken umbrella idea as well.
4 for now, fix it up and I'll be a very happy person.

sketch the girl and you have a winner

i think the sketched raindrop looks kinda weird with the girl, cuz shes not sketched. i'd like it better is the raindrop and the girl were the same style though.

i give a 3 (in place of 5) only because of wrong placement.. i'd prefer the tiny girl with the umbrella and the raindrop centred, and no image on the back...

id buy it without the girl on the back.

raindrop is too big. make smaller ones with more of them. lose the girl on the back. and maybe desguise "rain drops fallin on my head" some where on the front picture.

Well, i guess its unanimous that the mixes styles look bad. Ill redraw the girl on the front and her umbrella in sketchy style, add a broken ubrella on the back, and then resubmit. I think the image is too long to be centered, but ill try it and see.

Ciararocks-if i used your idea, it would completely ruin the design. The point is that she is about to be crused by an unnaturally huge raindrop. And text=bad. about 99.9% of the time. I think it makes sense without it.

*umbrella

holy f*ck
i love it
id buy it
wear it
show it off

$5

i love the idea, love that their styles don't match. but i think i need more space between the two. and maybe if she were smaller. they seem equal in size. for some reason i want the raindrop to visually overpower it to illustrate the title better. then i'd definitely buy it.

mehhh not loving the girl at the back.

i would really like it if you made the girl and the raindrop in the same style. (i.e., both scratchy, or both stencil-like.) it would also be nice if there were more raindrops. and i'd love this shirt in pink and brown.

but good concept, nonthe less. :)

i would really like this if the raindrop was cartoony like the girl on the front and there was nothing on the back.

If both were centered I'd buy it. And if it was a different color. 5.

make both the raindrop and bodies sketchy or all solid

i too like the broken ubrella thing... also, put the dripping girl in a lower (right?) corner... i don't like her centerd up so high... and i like the sketchy drop.

I love it...but I agree that the girl and the raindrop should be in the same style...keep on submitting. 4.