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Look up, crawl in.
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.......That's kinda creepy.... but I like it! Interesting view on something that should be different. Or something.
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I really like this one, and would likely purchase it, it only it did not have the text. I think you need to lose that part, personally.
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the left cloud's cheeks are a little bit too rounded/closed in, making them look more like jowels or something, I'd try to make it look a little more like the right cloud.
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the type is staying because I'm not afraid of it and Yes, they look like jowls, I'll probably rework this and resubmit.
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Stick to your type. best use of kerning I have seen on a tee. Spatially, the design could use more continuity. Great timeless feel though.
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For some reason this is creeping me out... makes me think cloud monsters are going to come down the ladders and attack the earth
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its hard to tell what youre trying to show .. a way out of teh clouds or a way into them .. untill I read your comment I couldnt tell ..maybe have some people waiting to climb up into one would help
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