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Nov 16 '05
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Final average score:
1.88 out of 5
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13.BLACKBIRD
im sick of emos running around screaming how free to express themselves they are and how theyre individual.... well stick it. i like who i am and i dont need to tell people how individual i am OR wear anything besides what i like, where and when i like, and i dont keep up with the cool, i like things because they look good. and i think this tee looks awesome.
RoughWriter
RoughWriter on Nov 16 '05
very neo-mod style.

I like it
pendz
pendz on Nov 17 '05
Eugh i dont like this at all. The design is boring and i hate emo kids
mezo
   mezo on Nov 17 '05
Well of COURSE you think the design is awesome, 13.Black- you designed it!

I, on the other hand, see this for the first time & do not think it is awesome.

The skyline looks really weird.
Your boy figure is drawn nicely, but it lacks that extra something to make it pop/unique...spikey black hair & a suit doesn't cut it these days.
The bird is really plain.

I do like the one big feather a lot. 2- for the feather
i beat SARS
i beat SARS on Nov 17 '05
haha sup My Chemical Romance. 0

i don't like this design, i don't think it's very well executed and i feel like there needs to be something more behind a design for it to be good.

relax about what other people think about your "style". it's your own, you don't need to prove anything.
13.BLACKBIRD
13.BLACKBIRD on Nov 18 '05
ohkay im getting the idea on how this is going to fare, can i ask you all not to leave a comment unless its constructive? seriously. im not trying to prove anything lol, i really dont care about everything in that first comment, i kinda just wrote it without thinking and it came on a bit strong. and its so not emo.
i dont know i wasnt a fan of the cityscape either to tell the truth, just needed something to fill it. the crow and feathers and bloke kinda looked weird without it though....
This is my first design and there will be more from me, i just gota figure out exactly what it is that "people" ie not just me want on a tee.
SO constructive comments boys and girls! kthxbi
aob
aob on Nov 18 '05
Don't like the design work to be honest.

If it's attempting to poke fun at "emo" it isn't working, to me it looks like a tee an individual who classes themselves as "emo" would certainly wear.

I can't see any developed idea behind this piece, just looks like a couple of random graphics stylised and grouped together.

Sorry nothing constructive in there, just don't really have anything to say about the design, because I don’t like it.

Well it's your first sub, so don't be disheartened,
best of luck in the future :)
13.BLACKBIRD
13.BLACKBIRD on Nov 18 '05
=D lol no i wasnt expecting this to go well.
The design was based around my formal (prom) for year twelve. we hit up the city afterwards and by the time we were on the way home thats roughly what it looked like to us. not poking fun at all.
hopefully my "caution" will get through, i have hopes for that but hey...
KimberlyAnne
KimberlyAnne on Nov 18 '05
my first impression was that the kid got into a fight with the bird..

but oh well. It's nicely draw, I think.

&real emo people don't wear things that they think make them look cool.. they do what you do: wear clothes that they like.. just a side note.

<3
rhubarb
rhubarb on Nov 18 '05
the figure reminds me of jack white.
YouSuck
YouSuck on Nov 19 '05
Instead of ranting about "scene groups" you should rather put some effort into designing a t-shirt.

0.
13.BLACKBIRD
13.BLACKBIRD on Nov 20 '05
thanks for that. in case u missed it all, it wasnt a rant. i did design a shirt, and i did put effort into it. this is my first sub. don't score it if you are just going to diss my little comment instead of my shirt. DONT LEAVE A COMMENT IF YOU ARE JUST GOING TO BE A JERK.
spitting_llama
spitting_llama on Nov 20 '05
Ugh, I hate people who rate based on the debate behind a design. If the design is good, rate it high. If the designis bad, rate it low. Don't bring your own personal issues into it and rate low based on those. If you don't like an artist's view on life, so what?
spitting_llama
spitting_llama on Nov 20 '05
I really like the head of the character, but the suit needs more detail. It seems a bit bland compared to the rest of it. Maybe just add a few lines to show two legs, where the arm separates from the torso, jacket buttons...simple things like that.
Michaelmouse
Michaelmouse on Nov 20 '05
well said spitting llama.

Its a t-shirt fgs - as if anyone is going to scrutinise it like the above have.

I like the design mate - keep it up.
13.BLACKBIRD
13.BLACKBIRD on Nov 20 '05
llama thats exactly what i meant, thankyou.
i have another couple pending, just getting the idea as to exactly what makes a well designed shirt.
im hoping "wotcher'ead" will do well.
Chittix
Chittix on Nov 20 '05
I like the design on everything but the city - everything else in the piece is very bold and solid. I'd either remove it or redraw it to look a bit less stringy. Well done!
Rustyglow202224
Rustyglow202224 on Nov 20 '05
hey black...
I like it. It's good, no point there in saying it's not.

You should have given the fellow more outline.
but I'll give it a four. easy.

And next time, avoid saying anything nasty about anyone, because no one still believes "ye who has not sin may cast the first stone"

well stuff it to them, anyway.
Rustyglow202224
Rustyglow202224 on Nov 20 '05
and you prolly got flamebaited.
because they all gave you 0's
-SkitzO-
-SkitzO- on Nov 21 '05
id buy it
its awesome
shes eletrik
shes eletrik on Nov 21 '05
not sure about this one.
i like it
but there is something that doesn't rub me the right way.
maybe it's just me.
$4
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