My first submission heres hopin I dont get reamed

It's kinda cool, but it'd be nicer if the lines were cleaned up a little more.. they can still be messy and sketchy, but not -too- much, otherwise it's hard to see what the image is.

The only thing that irks me is that I can't find his right arm.

I like the style, but I highly doubt that I'd wear it.... ever, really. Nice art, and nice placement, but I don't think.... I can imagine... wearing it.

$5. I'd definitely wear this. Pre-heated-death, I'm pretty sure his other arm is behind the shield there.

yeah but hat would make the torso tiny .. fix the propotions and put it on a different color its hard to make out the lines when theyre white

Too anime-ish for me.

" Too anime-ish for me."

hahahaha, that's the worst comment I've ever heard. I don't see how anime fits into the design at all.

I agree that proportions and anatomy should be fixed and aligned properly. It's an alright concept, but a bit to messy/doodley for me. Good luck in the future.

yes, his body looks like it's hidding behind the shield. do what the others said, also to make it more dynamic do more motion lines like from the sword arm. i really think this could make a great design so keep working at it,

He is hiding behind the shield. Hes fighting and he is hiding behind the shield so as to avoid being hit.

This reminds me of the guy in high school who would scribble in his notebook during class. I'd glance over and see that drawn in the book. I think he killed himself. My advice: pay more attention in your science classes.

No offense, but technically this drawing isn't that great, and really hard to see what's going on. Go to www.saveloomis.org and study up on anatomy. The idea is nice- But not well executed. Clever way to sell your art, though. (And yes, I'm an artist too, not just a critic =P)

nice artwork but its hard to tell that thing is his shield

i love it must ahve, must be printed $5

A manly design it be. Though it's too sketchy and not easily identified.