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Okay everyone, I've been thinking of some revisions to make, but please tell me what you think.
You can check out a closeup here: http://emilyneumann.com/tears1.jpg I've been thinking of making the black heart more scraggly on the outside. |
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Ohhh Emily. Its a nice shirt. Id wear it. :)
love you girl. ~woody~ |
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Looks a little off balance, and I think the heart would look better if it's outline was kinda sketchy like everything else. :)
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Yea i agree with you mike.
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i agree with mike. and id buy it.
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I think the balance is alright! However, I wonder how this skull can smell anything. haha. Perhaps darkening in the eye-sockets to make it even more angst-ridden?
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Yea I had thought of filling in the eyesockets and maybe making them look a lil sad.
And I agree with the outline of the heart. I wanted to put it over where your read heart is :) |
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And about the nose....I thought it just looked cuter. But i think next time I'll make the eyes closer to the mouth.
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Returning the love.
Thanx eneums |
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That's a really awesome shirt.
I think the heart should be a lot more sketchy also. 4$ |
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Definately change the heart.
It's emolicious. |
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benfrg91 on Nov 09 '05 emo...
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I think it would work a little better in the centre of the shirt. The cartoon version of a heart doesn't really link up with representing your actual heart, and doesn't need to be placed in the real heart location. My 2 cents. Cool skull though for sure
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kaloyster on Nov 09 '05 Emo-friendly. I gave you a 4, for being cute. :D
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like it, i'd say the heart should be imperfect like the skull... it seems a bit stark
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hmmm..i dont think so
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I like the heart just the way it is.
I think it shows a lot of emotion- the skull is all sketchy and cute and sad because she is in love and when you are in love you cry when things aren't perfectly alligned. So the sketchy heart tear out of the eye doesn't match up with the heart she loves and just wants to be just as sketchy as her. If the big heart were sketchy there would be nothing to cry about. <3 |
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i love it.
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I'm so surprised so many people like it :) I'm gonna do a version 2 of this design over the weekend.
Does anyone else think I should fill the eyes in? |
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keep everything about the skull the same, although i suggest changing the heart to the same style as the skull. i'd defiantely buy it if you did that, becuase i love the skull!
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no leave the eyes they look totally cute the way they are
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I don't like emo, but I like the shirt. Doesn't have to be emo to me!!!
Anyhoo, I like the way you drew the skull. If you're not drawing pictures for an anatomy book, then i really think it's quite fine if you're missing the opening to the nasal cavity. Geez.. some people. |
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Hehe. Here's the updated heart:
http://emilyneumann.com/whenskullscryv2.gif |
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definitley keep the solid heart! 5$
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I agree.. the heart should be solid.... just sketchy still somehow :)
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Go sell it att PacSun.
It's a 2. -Hoping |
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when doves cry?
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Ohh. I like it.
A lot. I would wear it anyday. =) And. No, don't fill in the eyes. They look fantabulous already. < 3 - Rae |
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id wear it XD
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its cute and simple.
I like the style $5 |
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oh god enough of the emoness!! :-\ but seriously, well done on ur first design i think its well done :) 4
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I love this shirt! I would TOTALLY buy it!
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girl skull me loves
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....skulling girls!
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heart needs to be sketchy
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white Ts are out, color Ts are in. but besides that I like the graphic
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..............Pink shirt. Maybe? Then, you don't have to color in the tear/bow.
Kinda gender specific.... and something I'd have wanted to wear a couple years ago. ....Cute, though! Good work on your first sub! |
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OMG! i love it, please please please, put on black.
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I would totaly wear this shirt. Though i'd like it better if it were just plain black lines on a pink shirt. Or white lines on black.
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IDK, I'm not a huge fan of putting it on a black shirt because I don't really like black shirts (cliche maybe?) If anything I was thinking of putting it on a natural color shirt, like bone colored.
And I totally think guys would wear it :) |
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