Threadless T-Shirts - Revolucion!!!

Revolucion!!! by amigovirgen

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Nov 08 '05

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REVOLUTION!!!

I know what some of you are going to say about the text... any way it works whit or whitout it but i preffer the text, its a very strong word!

thanks for the coments

cchana on Nov 08 '05

if the text was absolutely necassary, maybe the text could have been on the bottle, like a label. i would say without though.

whirzle1 on Nov 08 '05

it'd be cool if the text formed the bottle shape.

amigovirgen on Nov 08 '05

yes id tried the text in the bottle but it looks really small

thanks!

brian ist dead! on Nov 08 '05

awesome drawing, but that font literally ruins the picture.

brian ist dead! on Nov 08 '05

i just mean i dont want a Curly font t-shirt with 3 exclamation points. its a little jr high.

brian ist dead! on Nov 08 '05

Isn't the person ejaculating from the bottle 1 down from the top the same as the person from your 2 lava lamp submissions?

nerdery on Nov 08 '05

worst. font. ever.

amigovirgen on Nov 08 '05

yes is the same person!
veeery trained eye
the font?
i like it!!!
but as some one else say the drawing explains it self

mellowkitti on Nov 08 '05

I don't mind the text (is it supposed to be spelled Revolucion?) but I don't like the color of the shirt, maybe if it was more orange or yellow.

I really like the people coming out of the bottle though!

t4lk on Nov 08 '05

I'm not a fan of the font or the exclamation marks myself. Personally I think it'd look neat if the molotov cocktail were labelled "Revolucion" as if it were a brand. I don't mind the curliness of the text myself but the three exclamation marks seem a bit much.

D an aa a on Nov 08 '05

i like the people. i didn't notice them at first. i am not a big fan of the text however

cement_shoes on Nov 08 '05

R - E - V - O - L - U - T - I - O - N!

benmaxjill on Nov 08 '05

perhaps its supposed to be in spanish?

pillango on Nov 08 '05

bah

i'm in france right now. this shirt would get me beat up and/or arrested.

thisisshaun on Nov 09 '05

Great idea.

But:

Change the text.
Maybe make them look less like the models in the iPod ads?

amigovirgen on Nov 09 '05

ok now im ofended
there is no Ipod people on my dreawing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and yes revolucion is spanish for Revolution, well you know her we ave mor riots and molotov coctails than you so...

amigovirgen on Nov 09 '05

drawing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Tuxedo Oni on Nov 09 '05

Yowza, you're like the biggest tool since the sledgehammer.

entdroid on Nov 09 '05

If you're going to put the word in Spanish, you should as well put the accent on it (revolución) and the opening exclamation mark (¡).
I agree with you that revolution is a very strong word, but that font really brings it down, it's too curly and thin.

lygos on Nov 09 '05

Outside of America it might work if changed as suggested in some of the comments above. Inside of America buying this shirt would be like wearing an Anarchy shirt you bought at Hot Topic.

amigovirgen on Nov 09 '05

i dont know what hot topic is
Any way I will realy love to be your anarchist neighbor!"!!

dillieday on Nov 09 '05

I don't like the font, but the image is really creative.

Zalo on Nov 09 '05

fake label with flag on the bottle maybe? on on like the bottom right corner of the shirt to remember where it started

13.BLACKBIRD on Nov 10 '05

yup everyone says so. the font ruins it..if you did ¡ revolución ! as entdroid suggested in a much stronger, and less fancy font it would look great,

Mac_Pappy on Nov 10 '05

id say its a bit to trendy,
i agree withthe last person. Stronger, not as fancy.

LOSMATTOCKS on Nov 10 '05

I thought this was a vegetable the first time I saw this.

silefe2 on Nov 11 '05

beautiful t shirt..like you

amigovirgen on Nov 11 '05

i like you too!!!

tracy_marie on Nov 11 '05

this shirt needs the following things for me to like it:

1. different & smaller font and/or integrate the text around or on the bottle somehow

2. put the accent mark over the "o"

3. only one "!" and the upside-down one before the text

I guess I'm a grammar freak in any language....

kfizzle on Nov 11 '05

love the concept. i agree that i'm not too crazy about the font, but the word is necessary. i'd just prefer it to be more subtle....i like the suggestions offered about incorporating it with the bottle somehow...

fergi on Nov 11 '05

so molotov coctails are a good thing. yes, we like fire and mindless destruction in our revolutions. not speaking, not sharing ideas and trying to change things for the better, but violence. lots of violence.

i really do like the fire people, but the message, as you can tell, makes me a little ticked, as a person who dedicates a lot of her time to non-violoence.

plans on Nov 12 '05

ipod people? im not seeing that...

ccmtcdnt on Nov 12 '05

A SYMBOL OF CHAOS IN SOCIETY

andthedisaster on Nov 12 '05

id make the words be coming out of the liquid. or something different.

rouged_stiletto on Nov 12 '05

i don't like the font and its position, maybe all caps?
but the rest of it is great!

61u3_3y35 on Nov 12 '05

hm...doesn't do much for my taste.

branille on Nov 12 '05

As many said before, the font is hidious! I like what someone said about making it a bottle label. Some fixes and this could potentially be a 5.

Potsieth on Nov 13 '05

well since everyone has given great depth of critque

I like the people pouring out of the bottle. I did not read one comment that mentions them. the color change is well laid out too.