the edges of the design feel uncomfortable...how it just ends. the right side looks chopped off. try tapering the grass down more to nonexistant and finishing off the building on the right.

i hadnt thought of that, but good point, ill try and fix it

*Smiles* I agree, but otherwise, it's a terrific design. i love it.

I agree, it has an almost "unfinished" look to it. My eye want to keep seeing more to the right and finishing the building on that side would put a definate ending point for it to focus on. Perhaps the placement should be a little lower on the tee, but that's really minor. Nice design though.

Definetly unforgetable!

love it.

i like it, but i think it would look better ont he bottom of the shirt, with everything growing upwards.

5!

ben, i love you!

not really.

you have long hair!

what's with the cross-looking thing on the left? that kinof ruins it for me. i just don't like crosses. it's like it shoves this other message in there that i don't really see belonging to the shirt. a little more melodramatic than i'd like.
otherwise, i like it. the 1st comment and the one about lowering it are good. go with them.

its not a cross, its the tower in sydney austrailia but i can see why it pulls you away from the message, try to overlook it and see the overall message of the artwork

ttp://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.pherobase.com/photos/Australia/Sydney%2520Tower.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.pherobase.com/photos/Australia/Sydney%2520Tower.html&h=802&w=602&sz=51&tbnid=w8wj7EpljNMJ:&tbnh=142&tbnw=106&hl=en&start=8&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dsydney%2Btower%26svnum%3D10%26hl%3Den%26lr%3D%26client%3Dsafari%26rls%3Den%26sa%3DN

this is the tower check it out

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THE LAST 2 FLOWERS ON EARTH?

dig it

i heart this design, mr b. granlund

cool picture...not sure if id like it on a shirt...but its cool