my idea. a bright color on the flower or on the dress (something reddish or blue. add some more details on the wheels, specially the front wheel. the placement is cool. khaki tee could work best. 4*

Thanks 4 all the tips, the best I´ve had ever in Threadless.
The colour thing... can´t belive I missed that!!! The weel I thought of it but than I guess it works simple so I left it like that.

Yeah I agree with bluemagenta. If you made the very center of the flower a dark pink or red (but not an obnoxious color) it would make the design really stand out and it would also bring mute the dots on the dress and bring the whole thing together. Nice shadowing on the leg and arms, and I also wish there was more detail in the wheels. The missing spokes bother me. But with those changes, this could be incredible! Good luck

*would also mute the dots

Yes, mute the dots a bit... and make the dress move with her, as opposed as simply being flat.

fat little girls dont go on MY shirts.

I love this shirt so much. I agree that a bright focal point on the flower might add to it, but i would give this a 5 anyway. And I kind of like the dress pattern flattened.

Yeah I like the fact the dress is flattened and the wheels are left simple, but I would definitely add a splash of colour on the flower for contrast - good suggestion.

I like this a lot though!

I agree with semantitheft, the dots are flat, not flowing with the girls dress. Address that and maybe rotate the flower a bit to give it a little depth, with it being flat, it is flattening out the little girl. 3

love it! I am a pink person...so I like the pink shirt! VERY cute idea!

God, I for one love the way the dots sit flat on the shirt. In alot of Japanese manga, the same technique is often used in clothing. It's interesting to the eye as opposed to the flawless monotony of alot of designs.
Again, the flower idea from bluemagenta's great, if you did that I'd totally give it a $5, hands down.

there is a place in this world for fat people..... she's cute.. unfortunate if she stays fat, ive been there, but shes a kid.... let her be fat!!!!!

that is a REALLY pudgy little girl.

She's a kid! Kids wear baggy clothing! This is adorable. $4

In the end and considering all the comments I think the dress is just fine, the detail on the wheels would stay too and the thing I could really change is the color in the flower... could be done something about that.

actually, i like that she's pudgy. it reminds me of the fat chinese girl in Donnie Darko. there's something about innocence in it, for me. something about the calm before the storm i.e. highschool and all the jazz that comes with it.
i REALLY heart this

oh, but DO dot the flower's nucleus red (more chinese feel for me hooray) and fix up the dots on her dress.
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awww i love faceless children