if the title was something else and without the text on the turtle, it could be better. why would animals take the slowest ride in their planet. why would they take the ride like that on top of each other. could be better without the text for that reason. or with a bunny on the side looking surprised, don't know. maybe it's just me, no offense.

i would luv to see the illustration closer. i need a little color to suit my taste. anyway, i like the style somehow. they look cute and funny. specially the pony. good luck*3

that's adorable

it's sort of growing on me...but the text does need to go : /

thank you, actually im inspired by my country transportation, it was very horrible. And they using turtle as transportation, no one shock because it was ordinary. hehehe...

if theres no text, then Ill buy =)

[cause they remind me of animal crackers]


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very nice...

fantastic! hahaha dont talk to the driver

great idea.. i know the text is the point, but it would look good without it.

The order and the choice of animals is awesome. Could use some color though.

leave it! its freggin awesome because it made me giggle, i'd just prefer it on a different color tshirt.

thanks, I don't want to resubmit. so I just paste the remake. hope you guys like it

http://www.webpost.net/ax/axcuagenvu/remake.gif

deferent color and no text :D

Titles don't really matter it is just a label on the site it doesn't show up when you are wearing the shirt. Name your designs what you want especially if it helps get your message across.

i for one think that the text works. nice work.

It's an interesting design and, personally, I think the text is what makes it work. It's what sells the idea that you're going for, which is, as I read it, that public transportation is very slow everywhere. Keep it in there! I do think that it works alot better on the blue shirt. That really brings out the black outlines without bothering the eye from the color intensity change from shirt color to design color.