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 just trying to do something good...hopefully getting some love. either way, i love design and that is what matters.
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I like the idea, but the image is not clear enough. I see feet and legs and arms... and for some reason it looks like hair is falling over the arms... perhaps placing the person on an incline would help?
Would really like to see it reworked. I think you have a good start. |
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it doesn't look like the moon. it looks more like that man-devouring bubble from "the prisoner". is it crying over that girl's ass? please, it's not even THAT nice of an ass.
green was a nice choice, though. |
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umm.. thats not an ass. shes lying on her back. maybe you should put a bit more detail into the pants so thats easier to tell? a zipper? i dunno. other than that, i think you could put some work into the moon, concidering its a big part of the design and all.
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I love the idea -- this is perfect for concept, but I agree that the moon definately needs some more characteristics in it... or something. As for the figure, I love the lower half, but I'm not sure about the face/hair... as well. I love this, though.
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OlliRudi on Nov 03 '05 no offense, but it kinda looks like she's being pelted with ping pong balls.
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^ lol, i can't even be mad about that
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the forshortening is really great! 5/5!
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love the concept but better delivery would be coools. 3
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much agreed about loving the idea (as well as the barefeet) butthe person and the moon need a little tweaking...
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WOW, so much negativity for a wonderful design. Has no one ever heard of an 'abstact design'? Come on folks be nice. This sight is for sharing- constructive critasism is better than some of the outright MEAN things I have seen posted.
Some of the best design take a moment to sink in.. |
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Her legs are to big. Her torso gets loss. Hair over her arm. Looks like bubbles and not rain.
I love the concept, and the artist obviously has skill. I agree with the first poster. It needs a little bit of reworking and then I'd give it a 5 with a buy. Right now only a 4. Keep up the submissions! |
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love the deisgn. the only thing in the butt-not butt thing to fix. come back with an other submission and its a five. definitly on black.
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I love it as is. As well as your other sub with the peacock. I'm going to be watching what you come up with!
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i'm gagging on the emo name, tho... the design is great as is. You know it. (You do.) So hear the critisims and toss them. Stand behind a solid design.
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thanks for the love, critisim, everything. it makes me smile my cheesy smile. and i'm not emo so if that's an emo name then wow....i have a shred of emo in me. cool!
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it hurts to lay on marbles, and have them fall upon you!
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TIENE UNA TANGA!
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i really like the concept -my suggestion would be working on perspective --of the body, of the moon, which could be further away and smaller so you get a more interesting trail of 'tears'. also, maybe since it sounds like everybody thinks the tears are marbles they could be stars instead. keep it up!
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the only thing that is buggin me is i don't see how it looks like a butt....lol, i'm accepting all critcisms, and my eyes are open to everything except how does it look like ass? yeah i'll rework this one, and maybe the angle was a good idea but it didn't carry across. we'll see what i can come up with.
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This is wonderful. Just put a little detail into her face and hands and perhaps make the moon a little bit bigger. I love it :)
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I love the concept, but is a bit too undefined. It took me a minute to get what the pic actually was. Cool though.
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beautiful design! for everyone who has ever laid on the grass to watch the stars ^_^ love the feet and the foreshortening but the torso seems a little to abruptly hidden . . . love the "marbles", as if you were laying among the stars, tho maybe not quite as many on the ground . . . absolutely wonderful, keep up the good work!
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love it on the green. maybe make the moon more recognizable... do some circles around it or something. think 'starry night'
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I agree with the more definition would be good, but I also kind of like it as more bare. I guess the moon cries circle tears? I think it would be cool if at least one tear on the moon looked like a tear drop. or maybe showing some splashing..I know the moon doesnt have a lot in the way of water but...still. I like it a lot though.
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More of the same here. Little more definition and it's a $5 easy.
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I love it, It seems to give a "Closer to the Sky" feeling to me, The Moon was
relatively obvious, it looks as though the Girl is lying in the grass staring at the stars, but she is also laying among the stars... Kind of an exostential view, I don't like it on the White, its to plain and I kind of get lost, but the green works. |
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I' hoping you're going to re-submit this one. I'd love to see less emphasis on the hips and a little more on the torso, but with the idea, the placement, the green shirt, and the composition, I'd buy it regardless.
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