For a full coloured view check out http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24163944/

I really like this, but the lack of color makes it hard to see all that is going on. The outlines could be the color of the shirt, and then you'd have three colors (plus the white) to add interest to the dedsign. I would especially like to see his hair/goatee colored, since when I first saw it I didn't catch the goatee, and thought it was a little boy lighting his rocket off his cigarette, which I didn't dig.
Add some splashes of color, and you've got a winner in my book!

I originally experimented with colour splashes and stuff but I just couldn't seem to get the result I was looking for so I settled for this. Thanks for your helpful assesment:) Much appreciated:)

The colored version is awesome!

Put the colored verion on and I'd rate it a 5.

I'd love to but there's just too many colours:(

then this is plain. we want the colored one. figure that out.

u draw that? its good. not sure if id wear it tho

green-means-go said it all. try it with color.

good illustration btw :)

cool design...nice shot...

Full color version MUCH better...

awesome design!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i'd like to have this!!! cOOL~~ dont try at home, but outside? haha... XD

is this encouraging underage smoking?
the character looks 10 years old.
just a thought.

This is Rock! Nice illustration!

Well, I'm assuming he's a bit older than 10, considering the hair on his chinny-chin-chin.

Smoking is about to kill him.

I like ths alot on the light grey... Very good. $5

why does this remind me of Joe Dirt?
haha.

I dont really wanna wear some kid that looks like he shops at Hot Topic on my shirt.