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ever wonder if ghosts are scared of werewolves?
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this would be a lot better without the text, especially since you've missed out a comma after "stupid". the ghosts are really cool though.
funny idea. |
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The lack of a comma definitely matters. It's going to bug a lot of people like me. Anyways, I think the ghosts are cute and I would keep the text.
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You could totally have one of the ghosts talking to Dracula (same style character)... Aw, hell. Who am I kidding? I love it.
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oh crap... I think PoliceJon might be right? ummm... I will obviously correct text as needed.
in future I will have my English major fiance and / or my brother proof read any text... |
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i feel like the lack of comma makes it read better, sort of all run into itself.
i dunno, i wouldn't like it as much if you changed it. who needs "gramatically correct"? not i. |
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It could be, "don't be stupid, there is no such thing as a werewolf"?
or to change it completely... "don't be stupid, there is no such thing as a pacman"? |
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Pacman, not humans. Says I. I also say maybe contracting There and is? There's no such thing as pacman.... just flows better for me. And all. I don't know.
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i agree with: "don't be stupid, there's no such thing as humans"
but then again, everyone i know with a ouija board keeps telling me that spirits are bad spellers. |
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I agree with Der_Kunstler, if the ghost was talking to dracula or something, it would add to the shirt.
and the text does not need any corrections, it is fine as it stands. |
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A comma would turn this into a comma splice. You need a period or semi colon. Also I suggest changing the shape of the word bubble. Otherwise I really like this, and love the concept. 4 for me.
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A KNOW WHAT WOULD MAKE THIS SHIRT 100% BETTER:
Add a pack of cartoon werewolf on the back corner of the shirt. PERFECT.... |