I thought the idea behind this one was really goofy. And I couldnt stand tweeking it anymore, so I put a fork in it.

The diver's legs look weird, like they don't have any bones in them, and they're way too short for his body. He's also holding the paper really weirdly (with his right arm fully extended), and the panelling doesn't fit the angle of the page.
All easily fixable, though. It's a good start.

I like but fix the diver's legs...

ROFL. this could be a 5 & $, but needs some fixing...

where's the fork :p

i like this one. only i thought at first they were just hangin out, then i saw the title. but, ditto on the leg. other than that, $5

Whys there a harpoon out? I dont leave guns lying around.

it is so totally awesome. the shark is super sweet.

The layout looks busy and there's no central focus.
Nevertheless, thumbs up for the originality and of the message nobody tries to convey.

BuriedAlive, at 8:34pm on Oct 17, 2005
Whys there a harpoon out? I dont leave guns lying around.

well, it's obvious he just got home from a long day of work and it is time to relax, so he just threw his "tools of the trade" on to the floor....dont you throw shit down when you get home from work? guns=harpoons, give me a break.
and also the legs you gave him belong on a jellyfish, but im glad you made the title "interspecies marriage", and made them black and white
just like an interracial relationship!!

the frogman's holding the paper at an odd angle like he's prsenting it to the viewer and not reading it himself.

some of the proportions are strange---slippers?, flippers? legs-to-belly on the man?

Yeah, the paper throws me off the most. I like the little touches, the slippers for the shark, the chain around her (His?) neck...

That diver is obese, is it ment to be that way?

It needs a lot of work, too many things look disproportional

Nice idea. 2

hate it--