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Great start, but the image doesn't flow too well. The dragon's eye needs to be open yet angry looking, and if the man was posing as though he was brave/fighting/putting his shield out so he won't get burned, it would be more convincing...Plus I don't think the word bubble is necessary, the image speaks for itself.
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so the knight's trying to save the castle?
maybe there should be a little person saying help me. it's confusing. and the shield on the knight looks too small. |
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I would add a princess or some one in the castle to be saved. B ut other than that, I like it muchly. 3
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its so almost there!
i wish the teture on the brickwork wasnt so refined, and fitted better with the simple style of the rest of the pic. i love the little bumps running up the dragon spine, and the way he wraps around the tower- awesome. maybe stick a waving arm out of the window? the knight looks like a bit of an idiot- lifting his sword up to the fire- and i think thats great! the lower wing placement is a little clumsy- maybe have it flipped left, and silhouetted on the tower? ok enough now... |
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very nice disign, i like the colours.
maybe make the speech bubble not so rectangle and perfect |
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Nice idea, although the image could be improved. the dragon seems to be sneezing, and the knight doesn't have an action pose. The "save me" line would have benefited from a "!" too
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wullagaru on Oct 12 '05 taz-pie got most of what I would say .. I love teh kind of clumsy ness to it .. although I agree that teh dragons eyes should be open but have mad eyebrows.. other than that .. awesome
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yea this is really good idea .. colours are great.. Taz-Pie has some very good points you should consider. the knight looks hillarious how he is posed.. KEEP HIM!
if anything i would change the eyes and the one wing. the brick texture could be simpler but its not necessary for the image to look complete. personally i dont even think you need the "save me" .. i think it,s given what the knight is there to do.. 4... with a possible $5 when modified |
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I would definitely buy this.
Also I think the image is great just the way it is, but doesn't need the 'save me' |
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i love this
yeah just the texture, and the dragons face. i think the knights posture is kinda funny, he looks helpless and it makes it ironic. just add a damsel in distress(: 5 |
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Very cool design, but some more colors would be nice.
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princess! princess!
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i think if the "save me" was in scripty pretty writing then a princess sticking out the window wouldn't be necessary. plus it may be more subtle but still showing that a girl was saying it.
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How's about submitting a design of the little guy you keep putting at the bottom of all of your submissions. (?)
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i think the whole shirt is meant to be sarcastic. the knight looks absolutely bored with what he's doing, the princess doesn't sound all that worried. Prince Charming has had it with damsels.... I love it!~
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I like it alot, but I don't like the colors...
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i love the design! i agree with the people who'd like to see a little princess in the window, instead of the speech box. maybe have her looking really bored or doing her nails, eheh!
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Anything but a brown shirt.
I love it. I'd buy it JUST for the dragon. $5 |
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i love this soooo much!!
wish this were mine you know what good designs get: $5 |
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Funny!!
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i love it.
but id take the text out. everyone should get that there is a princess in there, epscially if you put a princess in, or an arm. and definately fix his left wing. and i love the colors. dont change them. |
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I'd nix the text, do something different with the texture of the tower, and obviously fix that wing thing. Otherwise, it's a solid design.
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HAHAHA i love this! the prince is so hilariously pathetic looking! what a great satire
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i'd love it without the "save me".
i don't think you need it. |
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hah! do i sense sarcasm?? i love it!
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Pleeeeease, not on a brown shirt. There have been too many of those lately.
I frikkin LOVE this. However, I don't think I like how the castle has such sharp edges while the dragon and the knight have more organic edges. 3. |
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this I love.
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I like $5
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I like this a lot; it would be perfect if the speech bubble we'rent perfectly square though...round, or curly or something would've been nice.
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"i wish the texture on the brickwork wasnt so refined, and fitted better with the simple style of the rest of the pic."
Really? I love the texture contrast. It would take so much away from the image if you changed it. I don't think there are any changes that need to be made to the image. I wouldn't mind if you changed the dragons wing or eye, or if you changed the speech bubble, but I don't mind them as they are either, so meh. If you changed anything other than those though, it would suck. |
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perfect.
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Very good ideas... some parts do need work and im not going to repeat them since everyone else took all the good ideas! BUT NICE WORK!!
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wow wow wow
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love love, but i wish the castle is ilustrated too..
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Wow..I didn't read the responses but awesome work..I love the texture on the castle..The save me comic bubble thing cracks me up..I love that its square..
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some changes -could- be made, but its so great to begin with, id buy it as is
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so freaking close.. the changes up top would definitely 100% make me want to buy this shirt
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i'd wear it.
: ) 4$ |
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Yeah, it's on its way to be an awesome shirt. Needs tweaking.. for one thing the word bubble isn't working.. its too rigid.
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Ohh yahh I like tales!!!
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I'd buy as is. Add a princess and I'd buy as gifts.
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i think the speech bubble is defo necessary.
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its cute, it would of been cool if you made a window with the princess showing instead of using text
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looks like it would be better.
on a black shirt. and the dragon. looks like he is constepated. |
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Yes!!!!!! 5$
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this is awesome
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