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Commander Croissant
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its funny with the title, but without it it could just be a fancy turd in a blazer.
dont mean to be rude, but thats what i first thought- "oh no. another poo shirt." |
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Yeah I guess you're right taz-pie....but I didn't wanna put text on it cause everyone seems to get ripped apart for that.....so I left it out....
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I thought it was some sort of worm before I read the text. In this case, I think text on the shirt would have been helpful.
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you could curve the shape of the croissant to make it more 'C' shaped/ make his sword a butter knife add a pot of jam?
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I agree with phones' comment and if you don't do that I suggest you add the test because it's quite confusing and not too funny without it.
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" without knowing the title people will just back away slowly and then start sprinting at full speed."
I've been looking for a shirt to make people do that. 4. |
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love the display. love the idea. love the shirt. five for you.
check out mine - http://www.threadless.com/submission/56413/Searching_for_Air |
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if you decide to put text on it, I think you should make it kind of small and maybe along the edge of the sword.
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score for originality! however, at first i thought it was a magot though, so keep the text, otherwise people will never know what it was.
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So I'm to copy what everyone else is saying: make it look less like a maggot and more like a croissant, and you've got a winner.
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