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yeah I thought about that bu tI wanted to keep it super contrasty .. It was originally on black .. but then I realized .. I didnt want to make an uber goth design
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i just don't like the placement, it would be nice if it was a little more centered, but still tilted.
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you thought red would make this less goth?
heh heh. yeah- the wingss need a thicker stroke, i think. |
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I think I have seen this in a magazine before? Maybe not.
I still like it butI think the wings need to be a point or 2 thicker. |
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I don't like the left wing. It's a little off. I'd buy it if that had a different stroke and it was a different colour. But other than that, nice job. :)
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the shirt colour is freakishly wrong...its like poop
but i love that illustration...kinda reminds me of my sketchbook. just wish the colours were different you know? |
maybe with a slight bit more contrast - like some darker shades of red.