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Sep 23 '05
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wullagaru on Sep 23 '05 some of this is really cool .. even teh random green cloud .. but he buildings are too flat if you were to just add teh side that yod also see at that angle it wouldnt bug me as much .. that and make teh telephone pole at the same angle
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Yeah I agree with the above. I might play with the colors too. But The power lines are awesome!
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hear hear! i dig the concept and the rendering of the power lines. and i think both wullagaru and deekinz have good made pretty good suggestions. right now, the mass of speech bubbles look like a "random green cloud". perhaps changing the colors will help with that. you might even want to consider tweeking the transparency so the buildings behind it show through, or maybe leave them as outlines [no color fill]. i don't know, all up to you. i'm just blabbing to myself here.
good stuff. |
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Nice design. I like the sort of cut and paste style, where the building perpective doesn't match the power lines, etc.. the cloud/bubble mass could use some re-working.. Is it just me or are there a hell of a lot of power line/telephone wire t-shirts out there. On threadless and otherwise. Anyhow, I do like the design.
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that's a power pole, not a telephone pole. telephone signals do not go through power lines.
and those are not transistors. ugh. zero, because you should at least have a clue about what you're creating. |
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It's a cactus building! (those need less water)
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o0o! its really pretty. I agree with perilous about the cut and paste style, it kind of adds to it i think. good job! Id so buy it.
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Duh Reno! Those aren't transitors, hahaha! I love the colors and the power lines. Someone had the idea of the building outlines showing through the green smoke, which I thought would be cool too. Either way, it is great! You are so talented Dogg, its on my Christmas List.
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very good colours. i like the powerlines on the buildings
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i don't think it really fits with the "if you talk any faster" thig, but i love it.
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3 days later
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I agree that it doesn't go with the "If you talk any faster" theme but it is a good design.
I would recommend just giving the buildings more dimension. |
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I like it as-is. 3 $
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i love this shirt. it's totally swank. i love how the buildings are, they've just got something about it them. nice work.
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98 days later
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sold!
&&you already know this is a wonderful T hmm love the simplicity |
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