Stop Pollution Massacre

i like the yellow and red shirts. but the smog/smoke is going straight into the mask and would be better if it went up a bit higher.

The green on the design is used because it's the most common used colour in ecology and nature subjects....

Would like to know some more critics...

The smoke looks like it's coming out of the mask. Is it supposed to be going in? Or coming out? or being blocked?

I would have the smoke bigger and put it behind the head and surrounding it so that it looks like the figure is breathing in an area filled with smoke instead of the smoke going straight into the mask. Looks like he is breathing it all in right now.

Then with the bigger smoke, you can have a much better place for the stop sign to be more prevalent (within the smoke area above the stacks and to the left of the face, as if the figure is looking at it).

The smoke coming out of the stacks took me a sec. to recognize. It kind of looks like sausage, no?

too big

no text

Red

The smoke looks like a penis. I don't know about you kids, but I don't want to wear something that looks like a penis.

A weird penis.

Okay, so not really a penis.

It still makes me think naughty thoughts.