nice idea. The hand done style of the drawing compared with the obvious computar text is jarring. why not make it all hand done?
I also don't really like the yellow and the harsh lines. It make the seperation between illo and text more prononced. If you can find some way of reconciling the two, I think you'd win the compotition.

Yeah...defenitely could've if u had drawn the text urself.

I think it is perfect... it has the charm of an old school medical chart, and that of course would not be hand written. Perhaps, if you brought the bar closer to the figures, like in the lower illustration, would make people feel better about it. I think that you did a good job with the theme. Good luck!

I agree that I maybe should have done the text freehand....but on the flip side I was goin for a text book kind of aproach, as SemantiTheft said. It was kinda rushed though as I was worried that It wouldn't be in on time....My 1st submission none the less, hope it does well.haha. IF IT DOES WIN IT WILL MAKE MY DAY> DAM WHAT GOING ON ? WHY IS EVERYTHING IN CAPITALS? AGHHHH!!!! GOD DAMN STICKY KEYS< IT DOESNT ACCOUNT FOR WHEN YOU ARE DRUNK!!

I actually like the orange bar with the text inside it. It gives a kind of a base to the shirt. Btw, this is an awesome idea, i would get the white on black, that is if i had any money..

ha...ha..ha.....

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet.....

This is really excellent, i like the concept and the idea.

Definately no text. The text makes it really crap. People will get it without.

But.....If you do keep the text, it should be "speaking too fast," not "spoke.." (so as to keep in with the others).

i looov the concept just change the ugly bar on the bottom and 5 $

I like this idea very much.

entertaining as an image, not so great for a shirt. I dont like the "text book approach". Curious: is the last guy sleeping or dead?

basketcase?

creepily wonderful.

you made me laff. :D

$5

work with the text. the images are intriguing without being too complex. the hand drawn look gives a nice throwback to the old instructional pamphlets of the 50s(?)(60s?)

anyhow. you almost need to double take to really get the image... and that's not a bad thing, in this case.

It's a funny idea as usual, I especially liked that people who speaks in a 'normal' way are pigs.
It seems the quick persons should choke with their text clouds.