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i wish you would have used a better font for the text, and made it in the shape of the word 'june', instead of june a scribble.
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- the second 'june'. sorry i retyped and didn't see that i left that.
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i love it, take away june and put the skeleton in the upper right hand corner, i normally hate skeletons but this i love. $4
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It would be better if the text formed a shape to communicate another message. There are too many elemets to it, i dont know where to look first, keep it simple. Hope this helps.
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Muy bien el concepto asi como el manejo de la tipografia, seria bueno visualizar el diseño en diversos colores
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no le hagas caso a Adán... la verdad es que lo quiere en verde limon o rojo... buena rola, buen concepto... I love It!!
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me gusta! talvez cuidaria un poco mas las curvas dela tipografía para lograr una mayor legibilidad, pero me late el concepto.
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