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T.E.M.P

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Sep 19 '05
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rosewaterecho
rosewaterecho on Sep 19 '05
I like it on white <3
bitterbat
bitterbat on Sep 19 '05
i like it on white too, but mostly cuz i don't like the hair being different colored than the head on the other options.
bitterbat
bitterbat on Sep 19 '05
but the bomb looks better with the ring around it which is missing in the white one



shaymeow
shaymeow on Sep 19 '05
I like the blue the most, I think the bomb should be just a bit lower down, looks weird with the window pane going right through it.

And I don't know about the very round thought bubble / circle things..
JCampRestored16
JCampRestored16 on Sep 19 '05
i like the black one, mainly the hair color
JCampRestored16
JCampRestored16 on Sep 19 '05
I mean, i like the black one how hair is a differnent color and the back ground is a COMPLETELY different color
segahekui
segahekui on Sep 19 '05
yeah the white one with the ring missing is an accident.. i also realized the blue one is missing the window shades. thx for the comments tho!
staffell
   staffell on Sep 19 '05
Hmm, I think you should rework this a little before resubmitting it, there are a few issues needed sorting out Awesome design though;)
YourBloodInMine
YourBloodInMine on Sep 19 '05
Wow i love it....
Boompty
Boompty on Sep 19 '05
i'm with jcamp
SemantiTheft
SemantiTheft on Sep 19 '05
I like the white and black illustration... I think that the hair being a different color is too distracting. Two colors total are enough... things are much more striking that way.
OHunique
OHunique on Sep 19 '05
I love this. Black looks great. $5
cattrfly
cattrfly on Sep 19 '05
Actually, I like the blue one best _because_ it's missing the window shades - I like the cleaner shape of the outline without them. I agree with shaymeow that the mushroom cloud might look better if the window didn't separate it right b/w the "stem" and the top part - maybe if the cloud was just slightly larger the window piece wouldn't interfere with it as much? Also, I'm not liking the sideburn part of the hair for some reason. Aside from those minor things, though, I really like this design. :)
loveisforsukkers
loveisforsukkers on Sep 19 '05
love the grey

love the black

5$
helo
helo on Sep 19 '05
to segahekui :



I'm guessing the title, T.E.M.P. stands for

"The ElectroMagnetic Pulse" and the circles

above the guy's head are visual clues of

frustration/confusion since the nuclear

bomb's T.E.M.P. just fried his cell phone.



My critique :



The window panes are too big. The entire

guy can fit inside just one of them. So

having four huge panes seems too big.



The bomb's outline blends with the

window pane divider. Some simple

lines on the divider should fix that.



In the non white shirt designs there's

a thin horizontal line that bothers me

since it doesn't seem to fit the design.

It looks like you were drawing on your

computer and forgot to erase that line

before submitting your design.



Keep the designs coming
sueza
sueza on Sep 20 '05
I really like the white one... but I think you should add the circle at the bottom of the mushroom cloud. Also maybe less thought bubbles (or seperate them a little) & either loose the curtains or move them away slightly from cloud.



This is a great design / concept and nice illustration. good job.

$$$
truck
truck on Sep 20 '05
change hair colors !

the black one kicks ass !

jaymoh
jaymoh on Sep 20 '05
not l iking the sideburn
skipcronin
skipcronin on Sep 20 '05
looks weird with the window pane going right through it.
annie801
annie801 on Sep 21 '05
i'm only diggin the blue one.
paranoiahax290
paranoiahax290 on Sep 21 '05
I like the different color styles, I think you did great.5
peziswonderful
peziswonderful on Sep 21 '05
i think the explosion needs some reworking, but i like the concept.
Gobsnocker
Gobsnocker on Sep 21 '05
meh
jade_hu
jade_hu on Sep 22 '05
i dig the black one!
DTLA
DTLA on Sep 22 '05
like the white one

concept is fresh man
worshipyourtoaster
worshipyourtoaster on Sep 22 '05
I'd like it better if the hair color wasn't different.
Sauza Gold
Sauza Gold on Sep 22 '05
i like the black one.

a lot.<3

5&$
coldshoulder
coldshoulder on Sep 23 '05
I like this on Black, 4
FalconNW
FalconNW on Sep 23 '05
oh man......both the black and blue were AMAZING.



i would get either.



awesome work
BuriedAlive
BuriedAlive on Sep 23 '05
love it on blue. I do declair, I think you might have stolen my heart.
danielbaer
danielbaer on Sep 23 '05
When I saw the preview box I thought "oh no.. ANOTHER iPod shirt"...



But I actually really like this! Ill give it a 4.

-daniel
Stellar_Brooke
Stellar_Brooke on Sep 24 '05
BLACK!!

nothingness55
nothingness55 on Sep 24 '05
black!!! all the way
diabolistic
diabolistic on Sep 25 '05
5$ pinku one.



1 in pinku, 2 in SHINKU



as in SHINKU HADOUKEN.
talkshowhost55
talkshowhost55 on Sep 25 '05
the black and white are terrific
bookworm
bookworm on Sep 25 '05
I cant see the drapes on the blue.
houseofjungle
houseofjungle on Sep 25 '05
I like it! Black is my favorite.
Trueflight
Trueflight on Sep 25 '05
The accent color on the hair is distracting.

I couldn't tell what the thing he was holding was... at first, my guess was GameBoy.
easy_target
easy_target on Sep 25 '05
cool concept but i dont really dig this one but thats just me.....
vomtext
vomtext on Sep 26 '05
very ipod...but i like the black, white& green better. nice job.

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