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I think you would get your point across just as well if you removed the cloud coming from the tire. It just adds clutter to the design, and could be easily mistaken as the farting. My 3.2 Yen.
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I agree with em_down, the kid looks fantastic, but the clouds need a little work. A little shading would help a TON.
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I understand why you want the cloud out of the tire, and thinking about it it would be a little weird w/o one but I think it needs to be changed. I like it a lot though, good job. ^_^
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Yeah the only good part of this drawing is the kid. And I agree it looks like flatulence coming out of that swing.
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people if you cant tell the difference between his ass and the swing then thats your own faults but no he isnt farting
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Do away with the cloud and have the rope swing going up to the colar, it will make it stand out more and give much more sense of space. Thanks.
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