the font is a might bit too big, but other than that this is a phenomenal piece of work :)

agree w/above. the wife wants this one

It seems to me this design is itching
for more color other than black and
white. Too bad you're limited to four.

maybe replace the text with dotted eyelines to the butterflies from the caterpiller, and a small thought bubble with a question mark maybe?

butterflies look great, drop the text. more colour would be good

feels like too many butterflies. they distracted me so much that i didn't see the littel fella below for a good 10 seconds...

My eyes go directly to the text, and they keep returning to the text. I would suggest removing the text.

Personally, I would have used two or three harmonious colors on the butterflies, and one shade of green on the caterpillar to differentiate it from the rest of the design.

Excellent concept. With use of the above suggestions, this oculd be an absolutely awesome shirt.

could*

Concept is great. Just remove the text and it would look great. Thanks.

Hi all, and thx for all your suggestions, it gave me a lot of ideas about this TS, I would like to submit a corrected design but dunno how to update it. Somebody can help?

Sorry for my english, Iam french :)

I feel like it's been done

I would like this shirt but the 'wannabe' text is too big and bold, maybe if next to the catterpillar it was written in smaller, more ornate text. Or maybe not, all I know is I hate that text.

to jackDaniel's :

You could e-mail Threadless and
ask them what you should do to
resubmit your revised design.
Here's a URL of the contact page
for Threadless

http://threadless.com/contact

this, i love. $5.

not bad. it's clever, but the text isn't nexeccasry. a possible change would be to have the butterflies flying all around (closer to the top) and the caterpillar looking up from the bottom

i like this design...i do agree with the comments regarding addition of a little more color (not much tho) and the catepillar going green. i think the catepillar should move down and towards the right of the shirt (as you are wearing it) and the text should go next to it...much smaller and perhaps some type of handwritten font even, but definately smaller and something other than your regular everyday font.

Excellent! I'd buy this immediately.

The color of the shirt looks like a dirty beige on my monitor. If it's supposed to be a muted green, that'd be better.

Change the font only if you pick something just as clear and easy to read.

NO NO NO!! don't change it!!

and i LOVE how you presented the shirt! how did you make that background design?

Great job JackDaniel! You may change the font... but I love the idea!!

has potential

I would buy this if I had to take a loan out for it ...
IF the wannabe and the little baby are removed. Yes, I know that's the point, but I wouldn't wear a shirt with that slogan.

make it smaller and it would be GREAT!