Hehe, she's sleepy (like me right now). Suggestions, anyone?

I hope you guys like it <3

I like the face but the knees look strange from head on

yeah, honestly, she looks prenant from head on, maybe slightly from the side?

Err, I could add a few creases where the dress sinks between the knees, if that would help? Thanks for the comments

it 's so adorable and serene ... ya mold the dress a little more

The first thing that my looks at is the large leaf over the figure's head. Large, solid shapes will draw the attention of the eye. Assuming that you want us to first look at the girl, I would suggest making the leaf smaller.

A suggestion for the blades of grass on the far right: instead of having them point away from the girl, add a little curve to them so that they draw our attention back to the central focal point of the illustration.

I absolutely love the girl's expression. Don't change a thing on that! As for her knees, perhaps you could shift them to either the left or the right, so that instead of looking at the girl head-on, we're looking at her slightly from the side. That would give a little more defination to her having her knees drawn up to her chest.

uhh.. is she really short or what?

Positioning! Center!

i love the girl, but not so keen on the big leaf over her...

and i can tell that she's sitting with her knees up =) lol

i would like it more without the 2 butterfly things on each side of her head.

very sweet though, and i could tell what she was doing

Yay, it's pretty and calming.
I think the folds in the dress type thing will help a lot to make the knees distinct and show that she is sitting like that.
omg, don't make me sleepy, I have palmer to read!

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