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wesimus
About my design
by wesimus
My first submission. This shirt depicts the struggle of choosing between what is right and what is wrong.
BentoBox
BentoBox on Sep 06 '05
constructively.. this is an overally illustrated topic and reminds me of a project in art school.
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sits nicely on the shirt though
MoniqueH
MoniqueH on Sep 06 '05
Maybe, make the girl in the middle a little different. Different colour shirt or something. It's kind of hard to tell what's going on.
affabletoaster
affabletoaster on Sep 06 '05
The girl has parts that match both groups--right and wrong. Her hair and her shirt colours are what does it. I like the concept and colors. Well done!
taliswolf
taliswolf on Sep 06 '05
Fantastic concept, and well-drawn, too. 5.

Constructively: that hand in the centre is a little big.
blandford
blandford on Sep 06 '05
I thought it was about choosing between being a red-head and being Chinese or something.
jeffiner
jeffiner on Sep 06 '05
wooah is she being bitten by one of the bad girls?! yowza. i think there are just a few too many girls and some of the arms and feet need work- a bit too bulky. interesting idea, though.
wesimus
wesimus on Sep 06 '05
Its actually a dude with long hair in the middle...heh. Thanks for the feedback. Keep it comming.
jeffiner
jeffiner on Sep 06 '05
so it is. pardon me.
em_down
em_down on Sep 07 '05
That is some Merce Cunningham Interperetive Dance Shit fo sho.
illustraTom
illustraTom on Sep 07 '05
To help the center figure read like a man, you may consider not bringing the waist in so tight. The way the shirt flares at the bottomt makes it look like he's got feminine hips.
awkwordy
awkwordy on Sep 07 '05
seems like it's something about deciding what color hair to get....
or girls fighting over girls
the meaning is unclear
Poor_Phineas
Poor_Phineas on Sep 07 '05
Just echoing MoniqueH and illustraTom's observations: the central figure needs to be defined better, and needs a straiter waistline.

I would suggest using a unique color for the man's shirt (white, for example) and give the same color shirt to the women; keep their hair as it is now. With the man wearing the unique color, the viewer's eye will look to him first (which I assume we want, seeing how this is the central figure).

The image itself works very well -- the direction of attention keeps the eye moving around the image. Very nice!
Poor_Phineas
Poor_Phineas on Sep 07 '05
By "same color shirt to the women", I mean "the women on both sides wear the same colored shirt."

Damn it. Where's the *preview* and *edit* buttons for these postings?
flintstone
flintstone on Sep 07 '05
Why does white have to be the 'right' (literally & figuratively) color? Why not...black?
BuriedAlive
BuriedAlive on Sep 09 '05
Possible the worst thing Ive ever seen. Im pretty sure you gave my eyes cancer.
Kamikazetornadoninja
Kamikazetornadoninja on Sep 09 '05
haha, i'd tell above guy to chill out, but i'd be pretty touchy if i was Buried Alive too.
Shangp
Shangp on Sep 10 '05
the choice is to be a girly man or a manly girl. it's a trans gender michael jackson thing
amdandy
amdandy on Sep 10 '05
is this a big ORGY - they need to be naked!!!
quoperate
quoperate on Sep 10 '05
I dont know why, but I like this a lot. It must be the drawing style.
Oh shoot. This looked better before I noticed the person in the middle has a beard. This would be great if you erase his beard and sideburns so "he" can be a "she", or straighten his waist and broaden his face to look like a man. (his features are too close together) Right now it looks like a woman with a goatee. Other than that you did a great job. The hands are too big for a realistic drawing, but here it emphasizes the pulling. I dont think you should change any of the colors - see affabletoaster's comment.
jayman22
jayman22 on Sep 10 '05
azll there bodies look like dudes!
icki
icki on Sep 11 '05
yeah looks like an orgy, or at worst, amass rape.
smashmiek
smashmiek on Sep 11 '05
If you drew it better, I would love to have one!
powdermonkey
powdermonkey on Sep 13 '05
The image looks pretty awesome overall, but like someone above said, i thought it was someone choosing between being asian or a redhead. hm. i also don't get why the middle person is a guy.
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